Closure by Eowyn315
Chapter: Chapter 23

Angie
10/08/2008 02:12 pm
Great update
Thanks!

All4Spike
10/08/2008 01:13 pm
If I was Buffy I'd be consumed with rage that Forrest was going to be getting away with it. IMHO It's true Spike contributed to the situation, but he wasn't responsible for Buffy being drugged, her behaviour when she came on to him or Forrest's reaction to seeing them together. All he did was take advantage of a situation that was not of his making. OK, so he made a mistake, but everyone makes mistakes and Buffy manages to forgive everyone else for doing Bad Things to her, so why not Spike? He is so genuinely penitent.
I love that you've brought more chipped vamps into the picture, I'm surprised they didn't on the show. I expect they rationalised it that all the others perished in the big fight in 'Primeval'.
More please.
everyone makes mistakes and Buffy manages to forgive everyone else for doing Bad Things to her, so why not Spike?

I think she'll get there eventually, but Spike broke her trust in a way no one she cared about has, so it'll take some time for her to work through it. Thanks for the review!

WhollySpiked
10/08/2008 12:20 am
This story, as always, is amazing. I almost missed this update because I usually check Vampire's Kiss where you haven't posted it yet, but something compelled me to come to BSV. I'm really looking forward to the resolution. If you don't mind, please dont forget to update Vampire's Kiss. Fantastic story. You're a great writer.
Yeah, I usually update BSV a day before VK... I post so many places, it takes about three or four days to get updates up everywhere. Thanks for the review!

10/07/2008 06:31 pm
Damn, I'm addicted to this fic! I couldn't go a day without looking for update and here it is! Great job! I love your Buffy(and me loving Buffy?!-that says a lot)! Hope, she forgives him. I love Spike(now and forever) and he deserves it. But if I had to be honest I'm not sure your Spike deserves forgivness but I stil hope he gets it!
Waiting for more!
Thanks for the review! I'm glad you're enjoying it - and I'm always happy to convert someone to Buffy-love. :)

Amaya
10/07/2008 12:49 pm
Please, update soon because I like the story and I want to know how it ends.
Well, just one more chapter to go!

Deb
10/07/2008 10:37 am
Good progression to the story.  Kinda sad for Spike right now as he's longing for Buffy.    Looking forward to updates.
Thank you! Glad you're enjoying it!

10/07/2008 09:55 am
I liked the fact that there are other chipped vamps about - more believable than Spike being the only one. 

But Spike and Buffy's situation is very difficult.  Once trust is betrayed, things are never the same again.
Thanks! I thought it'd be fun to have some Initiative escapees on the loose. :) Glad you liked it.

10/07/2008 08:51 am
Ohh, what's she going to do? Can't wait to see. Her reunion of sorts with Spike was so painful and bittersweet. Beautiful writing, Eowyn (as always).
Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

10/07/2008 08:14 am
“I just… I feel like I’ve lost something, like there’s a piece of me that’s missing, that’s just gone because of him…”

This is just a perfect, at least for me, description of how all that love and emotional connection between turned into such a tragic condition.  It's the lack of trust and deep emotional scars that Spike and his passion, along with hers, left behind.  Their only hope is that Buffy can look at her contribution to how things happened that night, try to accept and understand how they both played contributed to that horrible night.   I don't offer this as an excuse for Spike's behavior, but only as a possible way for her to try and understand and maybe eventually be able to forgive him. 

With deep love, forgiveness, sorrow, pain and joy and peace all are vital parts -
Thanks for the review! I do think there's some chance for Buffy and Spike, if Buffy can work out her issues. Glad you liked it!

10/07/2008 05:39 am
I can't wait for MORE!!!!
Thanks for the review!

Mark Evans
10/07/2008 04:49 am
I'm glad to see an update to this fic, it's definitely one of my faves :D .  I love the pace and progression of the story, and can't wait to see how everything turns out.  Thanks for sharing.
Thanks for the review! I'm so glad that you're enjoying it!

10/07/2008 04:22 am
Happy to see you're back - nice little cliffie!
Thank you! Glad you liked it. :)