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Once Upon a Dream by TammyDevil666
Chapter: Chapter 1
10/19/2008 11:48 pm
Good story idea TammyD - think you could write it out more. Loved the banner and don't run down your work naughty girl. Get a beta to give you some advice on how to improve what you don't like.
I do have a beta and she's always very encouraging, I just still wasn't too satisfied with this story. I also suck when it comes to making banners, so I'm glad you liked it=)
10/19/2008 05:16 pm
The concept of a fairy tale demon is not as lame as some other demons in the Whedonverse. Loving this chapter. So glad to see Giles more tolerant of Spike.
fangfaceandrea
10/16/2008 04:48 pm
great start.
poor Spike.. but we all know Angel can't hold a candle against him so...
poor Spike.. but we all know Angel can't hold a candle against him so...
Laura Janneck
10/15/2008 11:26 pm
How cute... that she got poisoned by a hideous demon? Well...
Love the idea. And the last paragraph with Spike and Dawn is really sweet.
I'm really looking forward to the second part.
Love the idea. And the last paragraph with Spike and Dawn is really sweet.
I'm really looking forward to the second part.
menolly
10/15/2008 06:28 pm
i like it so far
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