The Writing on the Wall by Holly
Chapter: Chapter Five

10/17/2008 09:03 pm
larry? very good read, thank you.

10/17/2008 02:39 pm
I can't wait to see what happens next!!!

10/17/2008 11:46 am
A nice  low-key intro to hell - Larry is pretty cool too.  I'm looking forward to the horror, Spike will have to be stronger than he's ever been before. Can't wait for more                                                                               

kim
10/17/2008 02:54 am
Larry's funny. And it works that he's not really malevolent, just doing a job...we know well that not all demons have the same temperment.

Looking forward to the trials.

10/16/2008 08:52 pm
Awesome update. Absolutely loved the Dante quote! It just had to be there. Can't wait for more.

10/16/2008 07:45 pm
Ha, Larry is so great. An amusing but real start that doesn't take away from how serious and horrifying the future will become. A great story and I can't wait to see what you come up with for the trials.