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The Writing on the Wall by Holly 01/18/2009 08:59 pm beautifully written chapter. thank you. 01/06/2009 04:13 am That was wonderful. Tearing up here. Belle 11/29/2008 09:52 pm Excellent!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Updated soon please!! They've finally interacted! Woooooooooooo! 11/28/2008 04:19 am WOW Great chapter! I am so excited for more! But from the looks of it even if it only takes them a few days to get out of there she has a long way to go to get back to even a shell of the person she was. Can't wait to see where you take the story next! Great Chapter! 11/28/2008 03:26 am oh me gosh! that was so beautiful! i loved it! ya_lublyu_tebya 11/26/2008 09:17 am That was a beautiful chapter. Loved Spike's desperate rambling. Loved the vivd picture of a lost Buffy. Loved it all. Can't wait for the next update. 11/26/2008 01:57 am Really incredibly touching....Buffy is heartbreaking. She likely didn't even know if Spike was just something her mind came up with to further her torment.....kindness, gentleness is foreign to her at this point. His love so beautifully described as he moves against his will toward her driven to comfort, to help, to heal. This rings so very true in every respect. This is so powerful and beautifully done. It is also a metaphor for their relationship in canon....she was lost and fearful and he just kept moving toward her offering solace and love....it really fits. Excellent, just note perfect. Mum Kathleen nxm 11/25/2008 11:43 pm YAY!!!! woz 11/25/2008 11:14 pm Damn! I'm going on vacation for a week and a half with no computer access, how the hell am I going to wait that long to read another update? This story is fantastic!! All4Spike 11/25/2008 11:12 pm A truly heartbreaking chapter. Beautiful and poignant. Your 'Spike voice' is 100% kim 11/25/2008 11:04 pm Awwwwwww!!! Spike couldn't relate this any more vividly if he was trying to write it down. His happiness and grief at seeing her, the magnet pull.... IT 11/25/2008 10:52 pm Hooray! Finally. Wow. That was really intense. Thanks for updating. | |||
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