Where is the story?    All there is are the words "Chaper 1" on the left followed by blank space, the the same words on the right on a white box and the word "GO", followed by more blank space, then (once again in white on the right side) "Chapter 1" and then "GO".     There is no story, and this same thing happens on all 20 of the so-called chapters.   Have you posted this elsewhere??

good job

 Your story isn't visible. All it shows are empty links to the chapters.

what happened to the story??  Nothing but the title...

im trying for a while to read your story but the only thing there is is just the title

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Congratulations, you've been rec'd!  Your story "Drawn to the Fire" has been chosen for the weekly recommendations and poll at The Readers Have Chosen (http://thereadershavechosen.eternflame.com/forum/ index.php?topic= 412.0).

fine beginning to your tale. disagrre with giles. in xander's case it is not grief that is causing the irrational thought process. thanks for the very good read.

Really liked the scene with Xander and the way he wants to blame someone, anyone for Anya's death.

Sitting home sick has left me with a lot of time on my hands.Thank you for starting a story that promises it fill it up in a nice way.

I really like how the story is starting and I look forward to reading more!

  Very promising and wonderful beginning.  In most post-Chosen stories, Buffy's grief for Spike after his death is basically just a distant fact that is shared with the audience before the story line begins.  With your story, you've walked us step-by-step through the grief and made it real.  Even Xander's grief or Anya and Willow's for Tara were well done and brought into the story nicely.