Drawn to the Fire by BuffyXenaDQFan
Chapter: Chapter 21

12/31/2008 04:53 am
Valid question. I understand the sentiment having a single baby by myself.... I look out the window some days just going "what if...? What about....? How will I....?" Luckily no prophecy. LOL

I like it. Nothing feels forced, like you're trying pus the pieces. Very naturally written.

Beware of long paragraphs... this last one, even on a large font, was hard to keep straight while reading.

More Please, :-)          Hermione2be

12/31/2008 03:52 am
Excellent Chapter - I am enjoying your story so very much - I was just in the right frame of mind for a Spuffy Baby Tale - Hope that you will be able to have new chapters fairly often - I am so eager to see where you take them and the other characters too.