Great start - intriguing right from the first sentence. 

very attention grabbing first chapter. thank you for the fine read.

Very exciting story, G.  Can't believe our Spike stopped looking after a mere year.

Really great dialogue.  It was a shame about Jory but understood given what Spike needs.

This is a very intriguing idea. Well done.

Great start -  interesting story!  Can't wait for more!

I like it.  Very hardboiled.  The loners have always done it for me - makes it so much sweeter when they let someone in. 

Very original. I can see where if she was left totally alone in a demon world Buffy would do everything she could to survive. Puzzled that her Slayer abilities don't seem to be working though. Perhaps it's because this world never had a Slayer the slayerness didn't come with her?
5 Years have changed Spike too. I wonder why he got the soul (glow = soul, right?)
Can't imagine what the reaction will be with Buffy aged 5 years and fundamentally changed when they get back to Sunnydale with Glory still to deal with.
Can't wait for more.

All I can say is wow! I can't wait for an update! Truly amazing...

Really unique....I'm hooked.  This glow sounds a lot like a soul to me.  Buffy is tragic, she's survived the best way she can and it has taken its toll on her.  Interesting that they will be returned to the same TIME and place as they entered this dimension...that will be an interesting experience for those left behind to deal with!

Great start...going to favorite so I don't miss updates.

Kathleen