So I can't read it here, obviously, so I went to the link on your profile and read it there, but my computer is being stupid and I can't review there cuz it's all jacked up and anyhow I decided to review here. On to the chapter. I absolutely adored it! It read so beautifully, Buffy and Spike were wonderfully in character and magnificently described. I definately can't wait to read more of your work. I'm almost hoping you tell us how this affects the yucky Bangel kiss and the killing of Caleb and the whole necklace thing and Spike dying. I mean, would Spike really be willing to die if he knew he had Buffy when the battle was over? I'm dying to know! And, since I'm gonna hurry over and read the second chapter now, I'll just tie this up by informing you that I loved the scene, think your a fabulous writer, and can't wait for more!!!

Can't read on BSV.  Did you post any where else?

Miz  BloodyHell, You did a really beautiful job with this particular scene and your very lovely twist on the tv ending was fabulous.  You got Spike spot on with all the nuance and sweetness he can display.   You captured what I believe we would have all loved to have Buffy really say instead of the almost saying, read between the lines while she triple spaces.  Just a darling read and feels nice--need a lot more oooooos in smooth to give you all merit deserved.  Thanks.

The start is promising ... Buffy told him that she wants an 'us'. Makes me hope that he won't go down in flames without believing her that Buffy loves him. Or come back to her instead staying away :)
Looking forward to more.

Now that's more like it! Now then... how will Buffy react to Angel's arrival, and how will Spike react to Buffy's reaction?

What! No sex until after the apocalypse! The one where Spike Dies! That guy is never going to get any. Gah! Evil I say, it's Buffy's knickers that are the big bad, not the first. May you be brave Spike!

If she hadn't panicked and said that terrible, "Does it have to mean anything," this is how it could have gone. 

Nice start.   Look forward to how it plays from here.

Kathleen

 You have something very nice going on here. I like it and hope to read more. 

OOOH!!! I really hope you continue this its fantastic especially for a first fic! Does she still kiss angel I wonder better still does spike see?! - sorry im just excited. KEEP GOING!! :D

Very sweet Bloody H and much much better than Joss's version.  Except for the no sex part.  That was evil.

Oh. My. God!!!!! This was amazing! I can't believe this is your first Spuffy fic, all I can say is wow! I hope there is at least a sequel, perhaps after Spike reappears at Wolfram&Hart? To collect on her promise of no sex until after? Either way, more please!!!