After the Fall by BuffyXenaDQFan
Chapter: Los Angeles

02/16/2009 04:55 am
unfortunately for dawn buffy was fifteen not so long ago. most of us have a couple of decades before we again deal with the emotions of teenagers. very good read, thank you. and i would like to add a bravo for anya.
Thanks!  Glad you liked the Anya bit! :) 

02/10/2009 10:41 am
Good for Anya, maybe Xander will think long and hard about what she said, maybe not.
Thanks Lou!

02/10/2009 06:45 am
Really like this chapter - nice change and It's good to have a Dawn-Buffy serious conversation - 

It must be so hard to have a teenage son or daughter to try and guide through this time of their life.
Thank you! 

Katherine
02/10/2009 05:44 am
I'm very glad you're feeling better!  I missed your updates, lol!  Anywho, very good chappie.  As a big sister, I completely understand where Buffy is coming from and why she's so worried about Dawn. 

Can't wait for the next chapter and Spike's introduction to Hank.
Thanks!  Today I'm not feeling so great, but I'm writing a little, and I hope to have a new chapter up this evening. :)


02/10/2009 02:51 am
I can't wait until their dad is around, what a lot of fun conversations that's going to be! p.s. thanks about the help with the membership, I finally got in!
Thanks!  Yeah...I was watching the conversation between Buffy and Giles in "Tabula Rasa" today, and I think some of the conversation with Hank will be a little like that...only maybe a bit more anger involved.

Yay!  Glad you got in!

02/10/2009 02:38 am
Oh yeah....Buffy was all about boys at 15, she knows and worries *snicker*.

Can't wait to see the conversation between Spike and Dawn's intended...ahem.   This is going to be an interesting vacation all round.

Good for Anya!  She hit many nails right on their pointed heads....time Xander THINK rather than speak.  Good for her.

Kathleen
:) Thanks!  I haven't quite decided how to write the scene between Spike and Jake yet.  :)  Jake's definitely not going to become a major character in the story, but it'd be funny to see how he reacts to Spike's protectiveness of his girlfriend's little sis!

Glad you liked Anya in this chapter! :)

Ashley