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We Will Remember Them by Lilachigh
Chapter: Chp 13 "I will fight!"
All4Spike
05/06/2009 01:13 pm
I love how Spike & Buffy are gradually becoming accustomed to rescuing/helping each other. Buffy is slowly recognising the potential that always existed in Spike before the chip and Spike is having 'William' moments more and more often. Excellent slow progression of the relationship and very realistic.
So pleased you enjoyed the chapter. Working out their relationship with all the different 'who knows what about whom' has been interesting and will get even more so as the story progresses. Hope you will enjoy the rest of it. Do let me know.
04/30/2009 11:58 pm
at least buffy can help spike. very good read, thank you. the last line.,, not going there.
Pleased you liked the chp. Hope to update again very soon.
IT
04/28/2009 09:14 pm
Poor Spike! Hmm... maybe he'll need a little Slayer blood to get him back on his feet....
You might well be right. Keep on reading!
04/28/2009 12:01 pm
Oh-oh -- confined together in a dark place......
Absolutely! It's taken me quite a while to get them there!
04/28/2009 11:21 am
Ehh!!!!!! * is so embarrassed* I made a typo... I meant to say the line sums up a bit of Buffy's personality perfectly, not "That sums up Buffy's a bit of Buffy's personality perfectly." ... I accidently threw in an extra "Buffy" ... so sorry about that.
Don't worry. You should see the state of some of my posts!
04/28/2009 11:11 am
This chapter featured a great look into Buffy's head. I especially liked the brain clicking moment when Buffy realized an important truth about Spike. I also loved this line... "Buffy shut her thoughts into a tiny box, buried it deep in her head and threw away the key." That sums up Buffy's a bit of Buffy's personality perfectly. The scene with Joy was interesting too. Wonderful update!
Thank you. Was waiting for your comments! So glad you enjoyed the chapter. As it was the first thing I had written after being ill, I was worried that it sounded disjointed. But people seem to be happy with it. On to next one. Oh, they are in a dark hot place on their own! Oh!
04/28/2009 06:49 am
Thought you should know, the chap has posted twice--it's been happening a bit lately.
Gah, silly Spike, getting caught--I'm glad Buffy is willing to protect him (and I love that she's having little niggling thoughts about his nature and ability to care, even if she is trying to ignore them).
Fabulous chap, as always, thank you.
I never know whether to delete one or not. Probably I had better do that because it obviously irritates people. Glad you enjoyed the chapter.
04/28/2009 02:51 am
I understand that war is war and can do things to people but even so, Joy seems very cold and callous to a vamp that obviously didn't hurt her.
Joy is a Slayer trained by the Council. Her Watcher is not known to Buffy and we have no idea how she was educated by him. To her all vampires should be killed immediately. She does not understand Spike or Buffy, come to that! But there are character traits she and Buffy do have in common. Loyalty to their men is the main one.
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