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Randy And Joanie Were Lovers by Shell Presto
Chapter: Names and Faces
ya_lublyu_tebya
05/26/2009 11:18 am
And the awesomeness continues. So many revelations - and not necessarily good ones for poor old Spike.
More good and bad revelations to follow - I promise!
05/17/2009 11:37 pm
“BUFFY!?!” she screeched. “You’re making that up!” LOL!
I'm particularly proud of the word "screeched" in that line. Verbs add so much to a good line.
05/17/2009 08:36 pm
Oh Anya and Rupert will never live this down. But that was your premise. Feeling sorry for Spike as realizations start to dawn.
I believe Rupert can live anything down! But, yeah, I put them in one awkward situation...
You'll have to let me know if you continue feeling sorry for Spike. I haven't figured out if he's making out well or poorly so far, and I'm the one writing the story. : )
You'll have to let me know if you continue feeling sorry for Spike. I haven't figured out if he's making out well or poorly so far, and I'm the one writing the story. : )
05/14/2009 02:07 pm
They are so sweet!
jane
05/13/2009 07:06 pm
Poor Spike, losing his memory hasn't improved his confidence.
Anya and Giles don't seem to be having any problem bonding, interesting. Good update, enjoyed it.
Anya and Giles don't seem to be having any problem bonding, interesting. Good update, enjoyed it.
I find Spike interesting because, really, I can never tell if he's confident or not. Sure he acts it, and sometimes he seems it, but if you were to strip him down to the essentials, would he be? Guess my interpretation will be known eventually....
05/13/2009 04:10 pm
this fic is shaping up to be utterly AMAZING! hope to read an update soon!
05/13/2009 01:55 pm
Alright! Details in a story that are specific... that actually have meaning and contribute to the plot... Good job!
Everything's logical, nothing's forced - not the character's motivations or their feelings or the plot. And nothing's extraneous - it all contributes to the whole.
So, now all we need now is the next chapter. And the next. And the next... right up until the end. I don't know where you're going with this, but I sure look forward to finding out.
Everything's logical, nothing's forced - not the character's motivations or their feelings or the plot. And nothing's extraneous - it all contributes to the whole.
So, now all we need now is the next chapter. And the next. And the next... right up until the end. I don't know where you're going with this, but I sure look forward to finding out.
05/13/2009 01:50 pm
Alright! Details in a story that are specific... that actually have meaning and contribute to the plot... Good job!
Everything's logical, nothing's forced - not the character's motivations or their feelings or the plot. And nothing's extraneous - it all contributes to the whole.
So, now all we need now is the next chapter. And the next. And the next... right up until the end. I don't know where you're going with this, but I sure look forward to finding out.
Everything's logical, nothing's forced - not the character's motivations or their feelings or the plot. And nothing's extraneous - it all contributes to the whole.
So, now all we need now is the next chapter. And the next. And the next... right up until the end. I don't know where you're going with this, but I sure look forward to finding out.
Thank ye kindly. I'm trying to be compact and coherent, so it's good to know I'm succeeding so far. (I'm sure I'll be second guessing myself at some points.)
I'm glad to hear you say you don't know where I'm going with this. I'm hoping this fic is nothing if not original, so hopefully I'll keep my readers guessing (in a good way, of course).
I'm glad to hear you say you don't know where I'm going with this. I'm hoping this fic is nothing if not original, so hopefully I'll keep my readers guessing (in a good way, of course).
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