The Girl With Kaleidoscope Eyes by AJ Hofacre
Chapter: four

06/18/2009 04:32 am
ahhh, sh*t!!

will angel burn from the inside out?
will he confront buffy about being a vampire and then be dusted?
will faith join buffy and spike in a little make up sex?
will willow ever perform a spell properly?

the answers to these questions and more coming up!

this is a really good read, by the way. thanks for sharing!

06/14/2009 07:07 am
Fabulous Buffy Voice! 

And the rhythm is great!  Especially this bit:

She can see Angel clearly now for the first time in years.

He's kind of a dickhead.


Fun-ny!
Heh. I wanted Buffy's thoughts to be matter-of-fact. And you really can't get much more matter-of-fact than that. Glad you enjoyed it!

06/10/2009 11:44 pm
really enjoying what you have done with buffy. very entertaining read. thank you.
Thank you!

06/06/2009 10:45 pm
Wonderful! Angel's reactions are so true, and it's great to see how Buffy thinks of him now. The influence of Spike in planning for Angel to catch them in flagrante delicto in the graveyard is good, too. I wonder if Angel will burn up with the amulet, though... Just because your thick doesn't mean you deserve to die.
*giggle* Would you believe it took me nearly a month to come up with ways to piss Angel off the most? And I won't comment on the finale, though I will say that I just posted it (except for the epilogue). Read it first before you tell me what you think :) Thanks for reviewing!