We Will Remember Them by Lilachigh
Chapter: Chp 19 To bite or not to bite

Genny
01/02/2011 09:31 pm
Am I reading to much into things, Joy . . . Joyce, Aurora . .  Dawn.
This isn't Buffy's ancestry, is it??

Really enjoying the entire story!

07/03/2009 08:10 pm
he was deeply ashamed of his impulsive action - great!  Loved Spike dithering about being bad and making up lame excuses for saving the brat.  Great chapter.
 He really is suffering, isn't he?  And it won't get better any time soon!

Messiah
07/03/2009 05:53 pm
*Throws pom poms in the air* I've come to motivate you lol

C'mon get 'er dun! :D

07/02/2009 11:59 pm
very good read, thank you. chuckled through the last paragraph.
 Always pleased to have your comments. Much appreciated.

07/02/2009 11:15 pm
Get it together, Buffy! William is nice but that was cutting it too close. Fervently hoping that the next action is successful and Aurora survives.

silver81
07/02/2009 01:06 am
This is one of my very favorite WIP's Spike is evil, but not viscious. There are lot's of little hints and flutters of the heart that demonstate what might be possible... I don't know how you are going to reconcile their feelings with Spike and Dru's affair. Can't wait for more!
 What a very nice comment!  Thank you so much.  Do hope you continue to enjoy it. Hope to update soon.

estella
07/01/2009 10:57 pm
This story is just SO good!  More please !!!!  Please?
 Thank you so much!  it is so good to know the story is OK with readers.

07/01/2009 03:33 pm

"If I lost you - I mean, if I lost someone I loved"  Great line, I liked how Buffy's subconscious let that slip out. And I loved the locket clasp scene, I thought it was very interesting that Spike and Buffy were sharing the same thoughts. :) Fantastic chapter as always!

 Always keen to read your views.  So glad you are still enjoying their adventures in France.

07/01/2009 03:10 am
 So nice to see Buffy have the light globe moment that perhaps it doesn't matter that Spike has no soul. And more moments where they can't resist touching each other!
Cute idea about the stake tattoo for Slayers, but in the context of the story, I felt the darker undertone of tattooing people for identification with a shiver.
Poor abandoned Aurora, and poor Buffy facing the painful realisation that she will probably never have her own baby.
Can't wait for the next chapter!!
 So good to see someone has picked up the tattoo comparison.  I really couldn't see anyway of putting it across without spelling it out which would have been far too preachy and heavy.

06/30/2009 07:08 pm
It's good to see Buffy recognizing the good in Spike and especially that little thought about did it really matter that Spike has no soul.

Great update.  Loved the tension/confusion about Spike's growing feelings for Buffy and Buffy thinking that him not biting her meant he didn't want her. . .
 Thank you so much for taking the time to review and comment. Much appreciated and glad you are enjoying the story.  This trip is teaching Buffy a great deal.

Messiah
06/30/2009 07:01 pm
lovin' it!

But, could you maybe make the word count a bit longer :)
So I have at least 10 minutes worth of a good read.
I can wait a little longer so you can write ^^ I love your story :D
 Sorry, the story is as the story is.  I can't pad it out, I'm afraid and that seemed the right place to stop it. Do hope you are enjoying it,though.

06/30/2009 06:01 pm
Evil cliffhanger!
 Sorry!  Hides under table from Lou's wrath!