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Third Time's the Charm by zennjenn
Chapter: Back to the Future
Excellent. :-)
07/18/2010 03:53 am
11/01/2009 04:18 am
Fantastic attention to detail! I especially like the meditative breathing. Buffy was late to the benefits of that type of training.
I appreciate your comments. That's one of the things that's so fun about writing fanfic - you can really play things out that they never had the time to do with the show. Thank you so much for reading.
Buffy Convert
10/28/2009 06:00 pm
wow! This is very exciting. I wonder if Angel will get 'vamped' again? Is Drusilla still alive? "He followed me here"! Good. Hate to think a Slayer was so unaware as to not know Spike was following her!
LOL - glad you are finding it exciting! I didn't really consider bringing Drusilla into the story at all - as a character she drove me insane and I'm not sure I could quite captured her voice.
09/22/2009 10:24 pm
another very good last line. very good read, thank you.
Yeah!!! Glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment.
09/15/2009 05:37 pm
Ooer. Exciting. haha.... onto chapter three. :-)
Now we've moved on to exciting! This is so good - exactly where you're supposed to be! LOL Thank you so much for reading and for commenting. I love it! :0)
09/13/2009 11:00 pm
I like how you end your chapters. Leaving me wanting more.
Thanks, that's one of the things I like about your writing as well!
09/13/2009 01:41 pm
*nods* There are several good archives here. I only started reading on FF.net again lately because of GeoCities closing.
I'm late reading again but catching up now.
Oh 2014? Spike jumped in time too. Things must be different. Buffy is all business? Hiding the pain? *off to read on*
I'm late reading again but catching up now.
Oh 2014? Spike jumped in time too. Things must be different. Buffy is all business? Hiding the pain? *off to read on*
Yeap - 2014! That was one of the mistakes I made in the first draft of the story - made it 2009 and not enough time had past to allow me to do what I wanted with the story and their relationship, so I had do redo the math! Now, it's 2014 and hopefuly works better!
09/09/2009 04:27 pm
Really can't wait for more! You write Spike beautifully! I also like the french, and the fewer sunny days, and the 'Heroes' because Passions was canceled parts! I also like how everything is structured for the Slayers including how Buffy demands a report and talks to the younger slayer. That definitely reflects on the lost part of herself-being all professional. Hope the meeting with Spike doesn't end in dust! Kudos on a great fic! Update soon!
LOL! Thank you so much! Like most of us, I just love him and he's so much fun to write! I always end up putting a bit of myself in my writing as well, thus the TV references and the French. My beta and I had a laugh over the Hero/Lost thing. She wasn't as optimistic that the shows would still be around in 2014 but I figured at least Space would be showing reruns! :0) And no - the meeting does not end in dust. Mind you, I think there may be some dust on the bedroom dresser! :0)
Hana
09/09/2009 11:47 am
Wow. This is such a good start. Really well written, with great touches of humour. I'm really looking forward to reading more.
Thank you so much! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story and comment! It's good to know that the humourous parts are coming across well - you never know for sure! I hope you enjoy the rest of the story as much as I loved writing it! Jenn
anon
09/09/2009 02:24 am
Liking this alot. Clear, precise. Thanks!
Thank you so much! I'm glad that you're enjoying my writing style. Mind you, I have to give some credit to my beta Mabel, she makes sure that I stay clear and precise! :0)
09/09/2009 12:17 am
Great second chapter. Thanks for the quick turnaround. Can't wait for the meeting. I hope it's coming soon!
Thank you so much! I'll try to get them up as quick as I can! The meeting is coming....and it's good if I do say so myself! LOL!!
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