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We Will Remember Them by Lilachigh
Chapter: Chp 25 The Big Secret
10/11/2009 11:02 pm
It's cute..Spike protecting Buffy's honor in that time and place.
09/22/2009 01:35 am
the truth does have away of astonishing people. very good update, thank you. shame they cannot keep their memories. would set the stage of an equal enjoyable sequel.
09/14/2009 06:01 am
LOL Well, that shut him up!
09/14/2009 12:55 am
Buffy stared down into the face that was so familiar and yet so different - brown curls, still soaked in blood and sticking to his forehead, the odd clothes, the smell of the French cigarettes he’d been smoking still clinging to his body. But the eyes were the same and unchipped or not, they seemed to laugh up at her. The bond was there; it burnt between them like a flame that could never be extinguished.
Ahhh, you write their connection so well. And glad to see that Buffy's news had the ability to shock Spike. What will his response be?! Also loving Buffy's acknowledgment that she is in a world where humans are behaving worse than demons. Can't wait for more . . .
Ahhh, you write their connection so well. And glad to see that Buffy's news had the ability to shock Spike. What will his response be?! Also loving Buffy's acknowledgment that she is in a world where humans are behaving worse than demons. Can't wait for more . . .
Thank you so much. Always wait for your reactions!
09/13/2009 03:33 am
but after all, she just has to, well, lie there while he – well, does it! She doesn’t have to – take part - LMAO! And Spike acting like he doesn't want to have sex with her. Great chapter with Buffy finally getting Spike to shut up. :)
09/12/2009 04:57 pm
Loved how all the characters interacted with each other. I especially enjoyed Spike's dialogue, his spouting off during all the conversations was fun. I also loved the moment Spike and Buffy shared. And the bit with fried onions made me smile. :) Great chapter!
hochexplosiv
09/12/2009 02:00 pm
Aw.. you can't leave us with such a cliffie! Please update soon, I'm addicted. I wonder if he realises, just how well they know each other or if he thinks such a thing is impossible.
Thank you. Spike is in a state of complete denial at the moment. He thinks what he remembers about a certain event in France is all down to the Slayer's magics! Poor boy is totally confused.
09/11/2009 11:19 pm
Ah - smoke that, Spike! LOL *looks around eagerly for more* What? No, I'm not pressuring you. Not in the least. I wouldn't do that...
Feeling guilty about long delay. Holidays do get in the way of writing, don't they? And the guiltier I feel, the slower I write. Odd that.
09/11/2009 09:03 pm
Evil cliffhanger! I want to know what happens next: how Spike will react, if Buffy will let anything slip, if he's pig enough to focus on the question of if they've had sex in the futrue or if he'll ask about Drusilla. I can't wait for the next chapter.
I do think you use exclamation marks a little too often in this chapter. We can tell that many sentences are important, and you could just add a descriptive word to someone's speech tag instead of having every line end with exclamation! s.
I do think you use exclamation marks a little too often in this chapter. We can tell that many sentences are important, and you could just add a descriptive word to someone's speech tag instead of having every line end with exclamation! s.
messiah
09/11/2009 06:55 pm
OMG more!! I love this chapter!! So excited :D
"And raising her head, she found herself smiling at the look of astonishment on his face."
Brilliant!
"And raising her head, she found herself smiling at the look of astonishment on his face."
Brilliant!
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