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Third Time's the Charm by zennjenn
Chapter: Blink Three Times
K
12/27/2014 02:49 am
Hey just fyi, Hindi is a language, and Hindu is a religion.
:-)
07/18/2010 05:06 am
Buffy Convert
10/28/2009 07:50 pm
Good chapter. I liked the 'secret looks' Willow and Dawn both gave Spike. All magic can be dangerous - it's just a matter of weather what you want is worth the price or not.
Thank you so much. I loved writing the dialogue between Spike and Willow, it was fun building a relationship between the two of them. And I really like playing with all the relationships in a homey type situation. Reminds me of the early days of the show.
10/04/2009 02:54 am
very good read, thank you. love spike's unspoken questions at the end of the update.
You are so very welcome! Glad it's going over well for you.
calminthechaos
10/02/2009 05:41 pm
I love your fic, I don't review much because I've already reviewed the complete one on fanficiton, but I just had to tell you that this is so good, I love reading it again here! Loved the witty repore: "cup o' tea/cup o' blood". Excellent stuff!
Awww...thank you so much! Glad to hear that you are enjoying it the second time around!
10/01/2009 09:50 pm
As others have already said, I have trouble seeing Dawn and Xander together, but I suppose after 10 years anything is possible, even Xander growing up and Dawn losing and taste in men she might have had. Glad to see Buffy & Spike being open about their relationship and I think you made Buffy's explanation of the Immortal interlude very believable. Looking forward to the confrontation with the genie.
LOL - perhaps that's what happens, we grow up and lose all our taste in men! :0) Thank you very much for the review and I'm glad that you're enjoying the fic.
mazza
09/30/2009 11:24 pm
nice interaction with Spike, Xander and Giles - uneasy truce after all they have been through is the only way for them at this time, good writing. Now just to see how bad the big bad genie will be and what problems she will cause. Liked the blink 3 times title and comment!
LOL! Thank you so much! I loved that little bit too. I think the genie won't be as bad as whoever
let her out of the bottle. :0) All the best to you! And again, thanks for reading and commenting.
let her out of the bottle. :0) All the best to you! And again, thanks for reading and commenting.
09/30/2009 07:29 pm
So wishes from a genie will cost you and can be dangerous. Sounds good to get the genie back in the bottle.
Good to see Buffy so happy at the moment. Hopefully it will stay this way.
Good to see Buffy so happy at the moment. Hopefully it will stay this way.
Aaw... come on! :0) When is Buffy ever happy for long?
Amaya
09/30/2009 04:14 pm
I like the story, so please keep writing and update sooner.
Thank you so much! I'm so glad you are enjoying it.
Jen
09/30/2009 04:43 am
I have to say I'm disappointed since it looks like you're taking the easy way out and ignoring the repercussions of Dawn marrying Xander (refer to previous review). I expected more from you after you refused to just drop Buffy's relationship with the Immortal like so many other authors do.
Although you had Spike and Buffy discuss, at least somewhat, about her stint with the Immortal, the only conflict resolution you seem to be doing regarding Dawn and Xander was Dawn and Buffy silencing a few snarky comments. (In RL, the whole "drop it dear" thing only succeeds in delaying the inevitable and tends to just end up exacerbating the ensuing conflict.)
I hope I am just being overly critical and impatient due to my disappointment in Dawn and my loathing of Xander and you do have something planned in the coming chapters. You didn't fall into the trap of just writing off the Buffy/Immortal situation and hopefully you maintain that same standard regarding Dawn/Xander.
Although you had Spike and Buffy discuss, at least somewhat, about her stint with the Immortal, the only conflict resolution you seem to be doing regarding Dawn and Xander was Dawn and Buffy silencing a few snarky comments. (In RL, the whole "drop it dear" thing only succeeds in delaying the inevitable and tends to just end up exacerbating the ensuing conflict.)
I hope I am just being overly critical and impatient due to my disappointment in Dawn and my loathing of Xander and you do have something planned in the coming chapters. You didn't fall into the trap of just writing off the Buffy/Immortal situation and hopefully you maintain that same standard regarding Dawn/Xander.
I'm sorry to have disappointed you. My focus in this peice really was Spike and Buffy and I'll admit that the others are merely secondary characters. Dawn and Xander in particular are not favorites
of mine and I don't spend too much time on them, unfortunately this may have resulted in a
glossing over of this particular aspect of the story. Thank you very much for the feedback and I
do apologize for any oversight.
of mine and I don't spend too much time on them, unfortunately this may have resulted in a
glossing over of this particular aspect of the story. Thank you very much for the feedback and I
do apologize for any oversight.
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