A Wish Your Heart Makes by Alexannah
Chapter: Doodles of the Heart

12/01/2009 03:09 am
Great start! Love time travel tales. As an aside, my parents were not allowed to be alone together prior to marriage in the 40s rural South.

11/24/2009 05:35 pm
Very sweet.  It's always nice to go back and visit the sweet Buffy of S1 and S2

11/22/2009 12:46 am
very good opening chapter, thank you. enjoyed the last line. the rest should be fun.

Niori
11/02/2009 08:27 am
This is cute. Can't wait for Spike to make an appearence.

11/01/2009 05:28 am
I like how this is starting out.  I'm anxious to see what happens when Spike arrives in Sunnydale.

10/31/2009 11:37 pm
Oh I really like the start of this one! Good twist.
Looking forward to more.

katerina
10/31/2009 10:06 am
Very interesting.Cant wait to read more of this story.

10/31/2009 12:14 am
Alexannah, I really love your stories, and it's great to hear this one will be updating quickly. Your description of Buffy and William fitted them very well and the tone of the whole chapter was filled with such happiness and contentment, but makes me worry about how it will crack apart! The doodled heart was a nice touch.

I never really understood how Buffy fell for Angel or ended up going out with him... it seemed very vague and too romantic to make any sense. Was it the third time she saw him that they kissed and he vamped out, and she was so upset because she was almost in love with him?

I can't wait to see how Spike comes into the story, you have such a great way of showing his character! 

(A little OT, but I thought you might like to read Euridice's story Legion of True Hearts, which is pretty long but also amazing and well worth the read. It also deals with the issue of falling for William, and how much he is Spike. http://loveslastglimpse.com/legions/01_pent_in_walls_of_glass.htm