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Paper Promise by Jess Marie
Chapter: Together
Jags
12/16/2013 08:28 am
So beautiful. Thank you
Tink0185
03/12/2011 03:11 am
THIS STORY IS FANTASTIC. Very well writtenk; well worded with good, engaging dialogue and just enough angst. I loved it. The sexy scenes were fantastic as well, especially the last one. :) Loved it. Keep writing!!
04/24/2010 12:30 am
Thanks so much for sharing such a wonderful story so rich in detail. I enjoyed bit.
02/27/2010 12:47 am
You did everything you sought to do and more. Wonderful fic!
Jamie
02/04/2010 07:54 am
Read this all in one go. It was lovely and painful and hopeful. It was also bodice-rippingly hot. I mean, hawt. I loved every breathtaking minute if it. Thank you for a wonderful read. :)
01/24/2010 06:01 pm
What a great story. Loved the idea of the blank page of 'All the places I’d go, people I’d eat, things I’d kill when the chip came out' which became a blank page of 'things I wouldn't do for Buffy' - except hurt Dawn. Sums Spike up perfectly.
A bit disappointed Buffy didn't openly admit her feelings to him before he got the soul - but you can't have everything in all fics!
Going to have a look at your other fics now...
A bit disappointed Buffy didn't openly admit her feelings to him before he got the soul - but you can't have everything in all fics!
Going to have a look at your other fics now...
01/22/2010 05:03 pm
This was lovely. I'm glad that you had them wait and develop a friendship again before they tried for more and I'm glad that Spike was still Spike.
I do have to tell you that as lovely as the interlude about his mowing the lawn was, I couldn't help but think that if my neighbor ever mowed his lawn after dark I would be mad. :)
I do have to tell you that as lovely as the interlude about his mowing the lawn was, I couldn't help but think that if my neighbor ever mowed his lawn after dark I would be mad. :)
Spikesdeb
01/19/2010 03:49 am
Ah, perfection. Angsty where needed, teasing and leaving me scrabbling for the next chapter, hoping fervently that you wouldn't 'Joss' me. The happiness is blinding, and the hot Spuffy sex? Oh boy oh boy oh boy. Hot. Spuffy. Sexxxxx.
Wonderful stuff, and thank you.
I'll be in my bunk...
le
01/07/2010 10:01 am
gahawwwwee! that is my sound of aweness and greatness! cuz seriously, this fic was great! I could feel spike's pain ... and buffy's pain, they were both very believable ... i love that, when an author can make you really feel what their characters feel. brava!
Veronica
01/04/2010 07:51 am
This was amazing!! And I'm so glad that I read this!! I would definitely say that your vision of "redemptive, sweet and happy Spuffy sex" has come true; if that bothers anyone, then that's just too bad. Thanks for writing and sharing. :)
01/01/2010 01:04 am
Good chpater - keep writing!
Hana
12/31/2009 09:34 am
Wow, I thought that was excellent. Well written, amusing, a great grasp of the characters with dialogue Joss would be proud of. And of course, very yummy sex. Hope you plan on writing more because I would definitely look out for your work. Thanks for sharing.
12/31/2009 03:19 am
Maybe the point of the story was to get to the sex (I can always do without the graphics) but the story before was superb and very well written. I hope you're back in the Spuffy game - you have a lot to offer.
12/31/2009 03:17 am
Maybe the point of the story was to get to the sex (I can always do without the graphics) but the story before was superb and very well written. I hope you're back in the Spuffy game - you have a lot to offer.
12/31/2009 12:38 am
You're definitely capable! :D
I enjoyed this very much. Perfect reading for a day home nursing the flu. Thank you for sharing it! :)
Also, the effulgent bit made me laugh in appreciation. It's not overused at ALL. hahaha
I enjoyed this very much. Perfect reading for a day home nursing the flu. Thank you for sharing it! :)
Also, the effulgent bit made me laugh in appreciation. It's not overused at ALL. hahaha
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it and hope you get better asap!
sue
12/30/2009 07:42 pm
What a beautiful story. From start to finish: it worked. You achieved the full spectrum of emotion between them and it was kind of refreshing to have a Scooby gang and Dawn that were very credible but were also much kinder, more tolerant people than depicted in canon. Buffy and Spike both climbed the hill that turned into a mountain but by god the summit was worth it. Fantastic. Thank you. Happy New Year!
Thanks a bunch. That's great to hear. Hope you have a happy new year too!
tsme
12/30/2009 04:44 pm
Lovely story and a real treat to see a happy Buffy. The hot sex sure didn't hurt either.
Don't ever doubt your writing. It has an exceptionally nice flow and you have a real grasp of all these characters. i.e. your a good story teller.
Thanks for sharing. Ta!
Don't ever doubt your writing. It has an exceptionally nice flow and you have a real grasp of all these characters. i.e. your a good story teller.
Thanks for sharing. Ta!
u girl
12/30/2009 11:33 am
I loved it.
Thank you.
Thank you.
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