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Prodigal by coalitiongirl
Chapter: Nineteen
02/20/2010 10:03 pm
I love this story. I can see the characters and the dialog sounds like them. The plot is interesting and I can't wait for updates.
One little quibble, Buffy has no water and electricity but does have a working freezer?
One little quibble, Buffy has no water and electricity but does have a working freezer?
Lol, so I actually pondered that for a while, but I remembered that we once had a huge blackout, about ten years ago, for almost a week, and we didn't open the freezer so the food didn't defrost at all. So I added this line: On her way upstairs, she’d been startled when she opened the freezer, still a bit cold for lack of being opened, and found blood bags stacked neatly behind the frozen spinach. Still a little lame, but consider it writer's license. :D
02/17/2010 02:05 pm
What a mess for all concerned.
Hear, hear. It will get better, eventually... :D
02/16/2010 06:32 am
Poor Spike- that has to suck hardcore. I am happy that the plan backfired on Faith though; I get that she's upset she lost Spike, but once she knew he was in love with Buffy, the wanting to break them up became super wrong (what can I say, I'm a romantic at heart?). At least she feels some guilt, even if she doesn't plan to do anything about it (hopefully that will change).
You know what, feel free to kill Willow before this is over. She's asking to be killed.
Wow Buffy- way not to let go. At all. I mean, I get that Angel might need some help adjusting and all that, but staying there and not going to see Spike? Bad call. Not trying to make things right with Spike? Even worse call. Hopefully she gets over her lack of judgement soon, Angel gets back on his feet and prances off to LA for his own show (What? I like Angel...just not with Buffy. lol).
Can't wait for more!
You know what, feel free to kill Willow before this is over. She's asking to be killed.
Wow Buffy- way not to let go. At all. I mean, I get that Angel might need some help adjusting and all that, but staying there and not going to see Spike? Bad call. Not trying to make things right with Spike? Even worse call. Hopefully she gets over her lack of judgement soon, Angel gets back on his feet and prances off to LA for his own show (What? I like Angel...just not with Buffy. lol).
Can't wait for more!
Yep, Faith is out of control. She has no right to try to take Spike back, not now that she knows that he and Buffy have something so much better...although Buffy isn't exactly being the stellar example of doing what's right these days... :D Buffy's running away from her problems again, something she does all the time throughout canon (until maybe Season Seven, but I believe that the suicide mission into the Hellmouth in Chosen was also her giving up, just like jumping off the tower in S5.) Hopefully, someone will knock some sense into her before she does something stupid. Update coming ASAP!
02/15/2010 04:59 pm
Love the plot! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Thank you! I'll be updating ASAP!
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