Prodigal by coalitiongirl
Chapter: Twenty

02/21/2010 05:51 am
 You have to love an insightful Xander :D Awesome job!
 I'm very fond of this Xander- he's just like the canon one, only with a shiny new friendship with Spike to keep him unbiased and insightful in those matters, too! ;D

02/19/2010 06:27 pm
Yay! Xander made nice again- you're right...he's totally in love with Spike. lol
I'm really hoping that Angel doesn't act like a complete and total jerk, but I'm not holding my breath.
I know I've said it before, but I love Tara and Anya. It's good to see them being such good friends to Buffy, when in actuallity in canon, they were never really close to her.
I liked Dawn's abrupt meeting with her. It had me chuckling.
Can't wait for more!
 Yup, there are parts of this fic that are totally borderline Spander. :D 

And I love Tara and Anya, too! My favorite part of them in this fic, randomly enough, is the way they actually seem to have a behind-the-scenes friendship. I don't really highlight it, but I tried to make it natural for them to hang out. I can't imagine their conversations. :D

This Dawn's a bit immature considering her age but at least she acts older than she does in canon, which makes her fun to write. :D