I don't think you mean lampooned at the top of this chapter - the only meaning I know for the word is to satirize or caricature something. 

You’re an undead man-whore.  LOL  Perfect.

Okay - four hellmouths?  One of them is bound to be St. Louis. 

Another great chapter and LMAO at Faith slapping Wesley on the butt.  :)

Great story.  Can't wait to see how you bring it together.

Great to read a set of new Holly stories -  This is terrific - an outstanding use of the Slayers from the series and the theme of mating.   Especially nice and interesting is the way that you bring in the idea of conditions that sent Buffy to Spike in her spell imposed vampire persona and their coming together.

It's been a long time since I read a Buffy Vamped work - I like how you make Buffy and Spike live through a period of the natural vampire existence - and now having to learn how to live with that part of her life.  Look forward to reading how you develop Spike's changed life now that his mate must bring such drastic changes to their mating bonds.

Heart breaking Giles treatment -

:) Thanks, Angel. And ha! Another welcome sign...

Faith teasing Wes - lol. I like when they get along.