Fragile by ya_lublyu_tebya
Chapter: Seventeen

08/25/2010 10:37 am
Uh oh. looks like Willow brought Buffy a little 'too' back in touch with her Slayer side, eh?

That girl seriously needs stripped of her powers, I always thought she should have gotten more repercussions from her actions on the show, too. She was coddled too much and allowed to gain a massive ego as a result. Giles said it best, she was a rank, arrogant ammature and it looks like she's no less in this fic, which is very true to the character. I love that this fic deals with Buffy losing her power and becoming like everyone else, whether its permanent or temporary. Sometimes on the show I think Buffy forgot what it was like to not have all that power and she did let it go to her head in a lot of ways..case in point her treatment of Spike and the physical abuse there. And she seemed to almost enjoy at times making poor Dawn feel small and insignificant because she isn't a slayer, I think that was a big part of why it was such a huge let down to Dawn to find she wasn't a potential. I'm hoping to see just a little bit of a balance of power at least for a little while between the two sisters. Yes Buffy is still the adult but she needs to learn her little sister doesn't deserve to be treated like a subordinate.

08/24/2010 11:33 pm
Ah Willow's look. Tried to fix it again, huh?
Sounds as if Buffy is gone and the slayer in the driving seat.
~ Looking forward to more.

Kitty
08/24/2010 02:35 am
Loving the new chapters
and tut tut to Willow ... Can't wait to find out what she's done now
xx

shadow
08/23/2010 09:53 pm
love it please update soon

08/23/2010 09:43 pm
why does that girl never learn?  i'm guessing she did a spell to bring the slayer back, but now buffy is gone in the process.  i suddenly really hate that chip in spike's head, willow seriously needs to be smacked around.  i'm pissed at her for ruining a sweet moment between them.

Amaya
08/23/2010 08:41 pm
Please try to update sooner. I like the story very much and I want to read more.