Defenseless by Rebcake
Chapter: Act One

09/12/2010 07:20 am
How fun!  I'm really enjoying this.  And now that you mention it, Joyce seems like a much more logical person for Spike to go to for help.  It is interesting that no one else has ever thought of it before now--you're so smart!
Thanks, Sensei! I'm glad you agree that going to Joyce makes sense! Other authors have had Spike ending up in Joyce's basement at some point in Season 4 and even in Season 2, but it's usually Buffy's call. I just cut out the middleman, as it were. I hope you continue to have fun with the next chapters.

08/26/2010 02:55 am
Great Start! But that last sentence..huh?!
I know! Nobody expects "Something Blue"! It's like the Spanish Inquisition that way. Heh. I'm glad you liked the start, though. Thanks for commenting!

nojiri23
08/24/2010 10:25 pm
neat! please continue! 
Your wish is my command! Act Two is up now. Thanks for commenting!

08/24/2010 10:20 pm
Wonderful start. I can just see Spike's mind working towards going to Joyce who was so sympathetic when Dru dumped him. So... Buffy's avoiding Willow who is all 'poor me' after Oz left and Willow has done the 'will be done' spell... can't wait to see the twist you put on 'Something Blue'...
Joyce may not be able to fight off Spike's foes, but she can definitely provide a decent cuppa. Sometimes that's even more important! Thanks for the nice comments! Act Two is up now.

08/24/2010 04:20 am
Heh heh - Love your Spike. He's so funny.  :)
Hey! Are you one of those terrible people who gets a kick out of Spike's suffering? 'Cos if so, we should be friends! Actually, I think I'm pretty easy on the guy...

Thanks for commenting! Act Two tomorrow!

08/24/2010 01:22 am
Awesome twist. I think I read it on Seasonal Spuffy, but had forgotten the very ending. Will there be more?
Yes! There are two more chapters (all finished), and if I squint I can see a sequel beckoning. I'll be posting the next bits tomorrow and Wednesday. It's not over yet!