Origins: Revelations by Niamh
Chapter: Part 2

Tahkaullus
11/08/2012 06:45 am

And I once again find myself loving what is written here. And by loving, I mean I hate Willow's guts, she deserves every painfilled trauma you can think of!

nmcil
08/09/2007 11:05 am
Nice scene with Wes and Dawn - just added my "Great Story" to the list - very much enjoying this wonderful story.

11/22/2006 06:54 am
10 -- how old is dawn supposed to be in this fic? because provided she's legal, i wouldn't be opposed to a wes/dawn pairing, actually...it could work...loved this chapter, looking forward to reading more :)

11/22/2006 06:48 am
9 -- that was a very hot spuffy scene you just wrote there, love :) even if they couldn't actually do much at the time...can't wait to see what happens next :)

11/22/2006 06:35 am
8 -- i jumped at that bit, pet...lol...very scary and intense...good job with the dream sequence, can't wait to see what happens next :)

11/22/2006 12:22 am
7 -- wow, what chaos and turmoil, but you make it so real and believable...hope spike heals up fast, and they can protect everyone from angelus...poor spike :(

11/22/2006 12:12 am
6 -- oh poor spike!! so glad they got him out of there!! hope he's gonna be okay...glad wes is heading to sunnydale...i'm on a wes-lovin' kick, can ya tell? ;) great chapter, love, looking forward to more :)

08/16/2006 11:34 pm
Chapter ten - Oh that was quite a touching moment between Wes and Dawn. She really needed to hear that it was not her fault and the anaology between her and Connor was excellant. He didn't ask to be born of a prophecy any more then she asked to be created of the key. great writing and brilliant scene!

08/16/2006 11:25 pm
Chapter Nine - Excellant chapter sweetie - I like Buffy's reaction to the baby. Just huh thought I was dreaming and calm acceptance - understandable - she has a lot to work on at the moment - must get Spike better - thought the not biting dawn and craving a vamp's touch was a nice part. Don't want her to get addicted. GREAT CHAPTER!

08/16/2006 10:57 pm
Chapter Eight - wonderful chapter - I thought the spuffy was sweet and very well done. Buffy cares so much about spike - you have done a great job with this chappie and showing the emotion and fear behind them!

08/16/2006 10:38 pm
Chapter Seven - I love Kirstin this is a great and fab story! She rocks!

I do hope Cordy is fine -I have this strange feeling she isn't going to be.... she is right Angel is coming after her.

Oh i hope spike heals quickly! Great story and chapter!

08/16/2006 10:29 pm
Chapter Six - Wow that was an amazingly intense chapter. The fight between the Knights, Buffy and Spike was emotionally driven and gripped me. I loved the reemergence of Kirstin. This is a great chapter and fab story. Very gripping!

Verda
06/30/2006 08:01 am
Really sucks that Dawn had a crappy first date, you wicked woman. How many times is Spike going to be totally thrashed? Good idea having Tara and Oz become friends and Wes and Dawn...tsk tsk, but very interesting because you know what Spike would do! Yes, your are quite correct in the that all 3 Englishmen were similar. All bookish, good looking,each rising to challenges, each rebeling abet at different times of their lives. Giles as a teen, Spike when he was turned and Wesley when he became a "rouge" demon hunter. My mom owned at least one of Edgar Cayce's books, I remember reading it as a young teen, he was quite impressive. Love this series.

murph
11/02/2005 10:24 am
Great new chapter. Damn that Willow! The really cool thing is, I just reread the whole Origins saga yesterday, so excellent timing on the new chappie. Nice addition of Faith, can't wait to see where that goes. I REALLY love this story. Thanks.