Running from the Inevitable by The Enemy of Reality
Chapter: Chapter sixteen

no_promises
02/28/2011 05:54 am
I just sat down today and read the entire story so far.  love it
I adore the teasing and the sexual tension.  I am eager to see how everything explodes.

. . .   I'm off for a cold shower now.
You rock! I love that you liked enough to read it all at once. :D

And the fact that you enjoy the UST is the reason I just might be in love with you. ;) I love making them squirm, and I too am looking forward to writing the... ehm... climax of the story.

*grins* Cold showers FTW. Thank you for the delightful review!!! :D

babyblues
02/27/2011 02:12 pm

If reviews lessen stress levels, and that means that you will post really quickly, then i will review however many times you want... cos thats how much i love this :)

you always leave me wanting more, its frustrating! grrrr.
moree sooooonnnnn pleeeasssseee???
:)
x

You're always so kind to me, being considerate of my poor stressed self. :) I can practically feel the stress level drop as I read your review! And you definitely improved my day once again by saying you love the story. I couldn't ask for more. :)

Yay!! Sorry for the frustration part though. I just love making you squirm. ;)

More this upcoming week, I swear solemnly! Thank you so much for being amazing!!! :D xx

Emma
02/26/2011 10:49 am
Great writing as always! / Love from Sweden
You couldn't have made me happier. Thank you so much for being great!!! :D Love from UK.

Sarah
02/26/2011 02:43 am

Talk about steaming hot!! This chapter could melt the ozone layer by itself!! :)
 
Spike’s line of “especially since you won’t let me steal” was so cute!! That vamp is totally whipped!! And Buffy’s stuttering “b-but…one bed” had her sounding like the perfect Victorian maiden!  I loved how you showed her insecurity when it came to her talents where “matters of sex” are concerned. Underneath all her bravery, Buffy really was very intimidated when it came to intimacy.
 
I’m happy to see that Buffy has the same reaction to “gentleman Spike” that the rest of us do – how could she resist? I certainly wouldn’t even offer up a token resistance! ")
 
Oh boy, then came the straddling!! (Spike’s mine! Who’s straddling Spike? – sorry, I couldn’t resist!!) Even though it was with the intention of healing, this scene was hot!! Of course, what would it be without Spike being his usual pervert self and making a comment like “all you need is a tight little uniform”. Nurse Buffy – now there’s something that probably will feature in quite a few of Spike’s personal fantasies!! And Buffy trying to justify staying on top of Spike for longer than necessary was gorgeous! Not that I blame her – you’d have to drag me off if I ever got that lucky!!
 
Buffy also slipping in a bit of extra touching? Now that girl is smart!! And poor Spike, I’m sure he felt quite “stiff” after having Buffy straddling him! ") And Buffy not being impressed at the sight of his “thing”? Yeah, right, and I’m the Queen of England!!
 
I can just see Spike with the “glazed look on his face” as he watched Buffy use her “feminine wiles”. He didn’t stand a chance with her pulling a stunt like that!! And, ohhh, a foot massage given by Spike!!! I think I’ve died and gone to heaven!! His cool hands sensuously caressing my skin, slowly moving further up my leg as his gaze locked with mine, his hands slipping inside my… OH SORRY!! Excuse me please!! I need to grab a cold shower – I’ll be back in a few minutes!! ")
 
ARGH! Now I need another one! :) That scene with Spike spreading Buffy’s legs to “settle between them”, then having her tighten them around his waist and “ground her pelvis into his” had me melting in a pool of sensual overload! I almost cried in frustration when that knock came at the door!! Seriously, Buffy and Spike - find an abandoned cabin and stay there for a week and relieve some of that UST!!
 
How sweet of Spike though, to order Buffy dinner! Honestly, if I had a guy like him around, I’d never be letting him go!! Foot massages, ordering dinner, buying me clothes – definitely a keeper!! :)
 
Oh, the mental image of Spike ravishing me (damn it, :( all right then – BUFFY!) with his tongue and burying his head at a certain sensitive area – I think my head’s going to explode - along with another part of me!! ") And Spike, I can assure you, Buffy most definitely would “appreciate it”!!
 
That last scene where they shared another meal, whilst certainly assisting in bringing my blood pressure back down, made me whimper alongside with Buffy. The sight of Spike using his tongue to lick a crumb off his upper lip? Unhh, I can think of a much better place for that tongue to be and it certainly doesn’t involve it touching any of his own skin!! ")
 
I am definitely holding out for the next heated instalment, although next time I’ll have a bucket of ice cold water placed right beside me! I love how things are steaming up between Spike and Buffy, even though the anticipation for the grand climax - pun certainly intended!! ") - is a torturous process! Sometimes I just feel like screaming "RIP YOUR CLOTHES OFF AND GET TO IT ALREADY!!"    * hint, hint ") *

Please update soon!! :)
 

LOL! Ozone layer better watches out then. ;)
 
Buffy definitely has him by the short hair… or shall I say by the balls? Either way, he’s whipped indeed. And for all the attraction between them we shouldn’t forget Buffy only had sex once and we all know how that ended. The girl sure lacks some self-confidence when it comes to the woman part of her.
 
Bad boy with manners? Hell yes. That’s got to be the hottest thing ever, especially when it’s accompanied by killer cheekbones and devilish blue eyes.
 
Hahaha, love the Buffybot reference!! :D I’m really giddy to know you found that sequence hot. And it wouldn’t be Spike if he didn’t exploit the obvious ‘nurse’ theme there, now would it? ;) He just loves teasing Buffy and seeing her squirm tough we gotta say he wasn’t left unaffected either. What with Buffy’s lingering hands…. Hee, she sure was reluctant to un-straddle him.
 
Indeed. *grins* It was definitely hard to for him. And Buffy was really just trying to convince herself, we all know the sight was more than impressive- hence the subsequent blushing. ;)
 
Buffy certainly caught his attention and got back on him teasing her. Feminine wiles FTW! It was really just one big tease of a chapter, what with the touching and longing to do more than that but never getting to do it. I see you liked it. ;) Yay for cold showers!! :D
 
Hahaha, I knew you’d be frustrated with that interruption. That was my goal after all. I am a bad, evil tease, but what can I say? I love making everyone squirm. And there shall be relieving of the UST, when the story reaches its… ehm… climax.
 
Oh yeah, you find a guy that does that stuff without having to be begged, and you better keep him.
 
Haha, I know how you feel. I’ll be damned if I didn’t want to be in Buffy’s place. He’ll make her one lucky, satisfied woman. ;)
 
LOL! Look who has a dirty mind. I think I’m corrupting your morals. I love it. *grins* And we’ll all agree that tongue sure has better uses and more interesting places to be flicking, aren’t I right?
 
 
Oh, the ‘grand climax’ will ‘come’ eventually, don’t you worry. ;) Just be patient and enjoy the ride. I just love teasing you, sorry. *g*
 
There shall be more this upcoming week, that’s for sure. Thank you so much for the delicious review!!! :D