Every Time You Say Good-bye by slaymesoftly
Chapter: Ten

03/16/2011 06:59 am

Aww this was so good. Heehee...Xander got his revenge with the Spike was a queen line. Poor Spike. I'm glad to see Xander and Dawn both being nice to Spike,cause that's what makes sense,nice to see Bobby being taken care of too.

I liked the way you got rid of the bugs. Angeria's story was so good, it's nice she let you use the idea.

"I'm not Dru," she repeated, willing him to understand the entire message she was sending - a message that included her complete willingness to keep his grandsire out of her life. Yes!  Oh if only we get so lucky in S9.

Now Buffy and Spike are alone...hopefully some nice talking and some snogging coming up. Loved Buffy's "We're home." Yay! o/


Great chapter.Can't wait for more.

Thank you.   - Yeah, chances S9 is going to go that way are between slim and none.

Mai
03/16/2011 12:43 am
GREAT STORY!!! Can't wait for updates!
I'm glad you're enjoying it. Next (last) chapter coming up soon.

03/15/2011 11:40 pm
Okay, you’re just spoiling us with all these updates, missy!

I’m enjoying this fic so, so much. It’s giving me a season 8 I can actually think of as canon instead of that piece of crap JW gave us. You’re doing a much better job than he did! He should just hire you ASAP and end our torment

Anyway.

Xanders little “Spike is a queen” dance was adorable, and so true to his character! XanderDawn have always been a little icky in my book but I didn’t really mind them here. They were actually kinda sweet. Yay you. I liked how Xander was more accepting of Spike here. Sure they’re not BFFs but some fanfic writers make him out to be a senseless asshole regarding all things Spuffy which really breaks my heart. As much as I love my Spander friendship they don’t need to be friends as long as Xander isn’t completely unreasonable, and you handled that perfectly.

Buffy and Spike are so adorable. I loved the “we’re home” in the end. I can’t wait for the next chapter!
Next chapter coming up very soon.   I've always felt that by this point, Spike and Xander snarking at each other is just second nature, and really means nothing in terms of how they feel about each other.  And that's how I usually write them in future fics.

03/15/2011 11:30 pm
Spikey was a Que-en! Spikey was a Que-en! Oh, I just love that!
Now for The Talk - or are they going to jump straight past that and get down to the kissage? Can't wait.....
Oh, I think there will be kissage soon; but they do have a few things to thrash out...