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Time's Fool by MsJane
Chapter: Chapter 1: Times Change, but the Song Stays the Same
05/22/2012 04:02 am
NIce setup - I would have liked to see you write out the fight scenes.
Thanks. There are fight scenes to come. :-)
06/18/2011 09:39 pm
Loving the concept. My complaint..well, I guess it's not a complaint as you got it right for Buffy. If you keep training, you get better as you age. My punches and kicks are much better now at 60+ than when I got my black belt. But Spike should know better that Buffy would not give it up.
Thanks for your feedback Joyce. Don't forget that Buffy had always talked about wanting a normal life, and that was before she was ripped out of heaven where she was finally able to rest. Leading an army for more than forty years is a lot to ask of her, so I didn't think Spike would have expected her to be as involved as before - not with a world of slayers.
Thanks for the review!
Thanks for the review!
05/10/2011 11:03 pm
what an interesting start. Well written and plenty to make me wonder what will happen next. Looking forward to next chapter.
Thanks mazza!
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05/10/2011 03:03 am
Sounds interesting. Waiting for the Buffy/Spike meetup.
enjoyed
Thanks! You may have to wait a few chapters but I hope it will be worth the wait. Thanks for reviewing!
05/07/2011 12:27 am
Love this opening premise! Arrrgh on "Joycie" though..
Thanks!
Yeah Joycie is a bit cutesy, but I think Dawn would name her daughter after her mom and Xander would name his son after his best friend. Calling her Joyce would get confusing, hence the cutesy nickname.
Thanks so much for the review!
Yeah Joycie is a bit cutesy, but I think Dawn would name her daughter after her mom and Xander would name his son after his best friend. Calling her Joyce would get confusing, hence the cutesy nickname.
Thanks so much for the review!
SeaPea
05/06/2011 03:42 am
Great start. I'm looking forward to more. Interesting premise.
Thanks for the review and for giving the story a go. I wasn't sure if anyone would be enticed by the summary. It makes it sound like Buffy's an old lady!
Sibb
05/05/2011 05:16 am
Wonderful beginning! I love the picture of Dawn and Zander middle-aged. Looking forward to updates!
Wow, thanks! You're my first reviewer too. I've already got the next four chapters written, just tidying them up. Thanks for reading!
MsJane
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