Time's Fool by MsJane
Chapter: Chapter 13: Crunch Time

07/04/2011 04:17 pm
Wow - things are getting exciting! Great fight scene.  LA should be interesting... what with everyone showing up at the same time. :)
Thanks SMS! I get so happy when people appreciate the fisticuffs! Yeah, L.A. should be interesting. Let's see if I can actually achieve that. ;-)

Thank you for continuing to review!

07/04/2011 02:32 pm
Fantastic!  Great descriptive action!  You got it girl!
Awesome! You know I specifically asked my beta if she could see the action. I really wanted you guys to enjoy that. 

Thanks so much for continuing to review!

Emma
07/04/2011 10:38 am
God I love this story. Can´t wait for the next part!
Really? Wow. Knowing that makes writing Chapter 14 so much more fun! Thanks for sharing! :-)

jane
07/04/2011 08:57 am

Wow that was really exciting, what a team. I think the baby slayers will be impressed by the backup. Well once they get over the shock of yet another souled vamp. Great action, can't wait for more. 

Yay! Action fan! It's soo cool to read you found that exciting. Thanks for the review!