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Two Sides of the Same Coin by behind blue eyes
Chapter: Chapter Four
10/28/2011 11:02 pm
Great chapter and evil evil cliffhanger. Why is Buffy climbing the outside of her house? :)
Why thank you! As for the reason Buffy is climbing the outside of her house is due to her supposed to be at the dorms and if she entered through the front door Joyce would know she's home (why Joyce didn't hear her coming in and out of her window remains a mystery to me...but I'm going with it here). And with being her mom she would clearly see that Buffy is out of sorts. Buffy was in no shape to admit or analyze what just happened, never mind to explain it to her mom, hence choosing the window entrance! Thanks for reading!!!
10/15/2011 11:45 pm
ooh what will Buffy say when she finds out that William was home all last night! Great chapter, great introduction of the other side of the coin, loved Spike's attitude, killed a vamp attacking his slayer and stole the bloody kiss. Looking forward to seeing these two together and everyone elses reaction.
Thanks mazza, you are actually the first to comment about Spike being William's other side of the coin! Yes, Spike doesn't want anyone else touching what is his. More will be coming in a day or two. Hopefully you'll enjoy this as well (and let me know--hint hint!!!)
10/15/2011 02:19 am
Ooh, visceral groiny demony Spike! Very hot! And I love the (undescribed) expression on Buffy's face envisioned with the simple exclamation.
I'm glad you enjoyed the hotness that is my Spike. It was difficult at first to start writing since I'm so used to writing his dialog not just his actions. I'm glad it worked! I totally pictured Buffy's reaction to seeing non-on-flames Spike/William in my mind. I'm glad it translated to paper (or computer screen) well!
10/12/2011 09:55 am
Love this so far!
Welcome, Rhaya! I'm so glad you're loving this! Thanks for taking the chance on my story!!
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10/12/2011 06:11 am
Hi,
I thought I must have read it in a flash-but then I checked and it isn´t very long-but it surely is very good!
Dammit,I should have taken my time with it.Thank you for updating,and I hope your not offended that I think it is too short,maybe I am just too impatient,sorry
I thought I must have read it in a flash-but then I checked and it isn´t very long-but it surely is very good!
Dammit,I should have taken my time with it.Thank you for updating,and I hope your not offended that I think it is too short,maybe I am just too impatient,sorry
No, I don't take offense at all. Actually the contrary, I find it flattering. It's like when you have a really yummy slice of cake. In a few bites its now mere crumbs and while you're eyeing the plate you scold yourself for not savoring its yumminess. Mmmm, now I want cake!! Plus, this chapter is almost half the length of the previous one, so no worries! On the upside, the next chapter will be posted early next week. FYI it's longer!!!
10/11/2011 06:11 pm
She didn't even bother to find out if Spike had left the apartment! Just blame Spike for everything, don't bother to ask any questions. Hopefully Giles will set her straight.
Yeah, Buffy during early Season 5 always thought the worse of our favorite vamp. Hit now, ask questions later...or maybe not at all. She will be straightened out, don't you worry! Thanks for your continued support! Big huggers
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