Out of the Blue by slaymesoftly
Chapter: Eleven

Jane
10/27/2011 07:24 pm

Great update. Nice to see that Buffy hasn't lost her ability to piss Travers off. Although she usually does that just by existing.

LOL   That she does. But taking up with another vampire is probably really pushing his tolerance. :)

10/27/2011 04:55 am
Definetly more kissing less talky Buffy! I am glad for Buffy and Giles that Spike didn't disappoint them. He could have killed Riley and he didn't. They had to be wondering whether the trust they placed in him would be a mistake. Glad to see it wasn't.
Well, not in this fic, anyway.... :)  He had a lot to proved, and less to seek vengeance for, in this fic than in some others set in this era. :)

10/27/2011 02:31 am
You were right - the Break Up Talk with Riley was totally unnecessary.  I guess I had been thinking he was going to come right in the end. Instead he deliberately tried to get them all killed. More please....
Formatting a bit weird - when I hover my cursor over the text it kind of flashes underlined and overlined - never seen anything like it before....
Huh - don't have a clue. I'll have to check that out and ask Dia about it. Maybe because I use the "post directly from Word" option. No idea what that does to the text, but it's the only thing I can think of that could be affecting it.