Time's Fool by MsJane
Chapter: Chapter 25: What Time is This?

02/02/2012 03:02 am
You slipped this chapter in on me! But that's okay. Now I've got two to read before I go to bed. :) Loved the whole thing - their uncertainly with each other, as well as the way they are finding their way back together.
Oh I'm so glad. That chapter was a little "sleepy" but I like writing them just being together, without car crashes and Dragvloks necessarily coming out of the walls. Thanks for reviewing.  :-)

Jane
01/21/2012 09:03 pm

Can't express my joy at the update, I'm sooo chuffed. What can I say, loved the morning after the big snog fest. I don't mind them taking things slowly, considering they've only been back together a week or so they're doing really well. It was good to see that Sonny is actually taking Spike's advice seriously. Angel's screwed up too many young girls lifes, I'd love for him to get some payback. I have no idea who Shaggy is working for, there's too many twists and turns in the plot. But if it's Willow, it's got to be the ultimate betrayal. Could she have sunk so low? Hope to find out, Great chappie.

Thanks Jane! I missed you. :-)  

I'm delightfulyl surprised by the interest in Shaggy now. People had forgotten his little shenanigans in earlier chapters before we revealed his little undergrond lair. 

And I'm glad the pace of the Spuffy is accetable. Believability at all costs is my motto.  ;-)

Thanks for coming back to the story.

Spitfire
01/21/2012 08:53 am

So glad you've posted another chapter - thank you.  It's been a great story so far with all the different aspects to it, and I can't wait to find out if Willow is behind the latest developments - and if an angry Spike gets to 'end her'!!  The interaction between Spike and Buffy is beautifully written imo - just the right amount of emotional reflection and physical reaction in each of them.  They're already like an old married couple; so comfortable with one another, moving from bickering to bantering in the bat of an eyelid.    Looking forward to more...





 

Thank you so much for the feedback Spitfire. I'm especially pleased (and relieved) that you find the interaction between the two of them believable and beautiful. At the heart of the adventure, that's what this is all about. However I'm having as much fun with my plot threads...  I'm so glad you're still following the story after all of this time!

01/21/2012 08:07 am
Mmmmm. Peaches.

Another lovely chapter. I am quite eager to get to the bottom of this mystery, though what with the Slod, the Penis Lady, and Sonny's attitude problems, there's plenty of interesting stuff to go through before we get there!
Oh how I've missed writing and reviews! Thanks rebcake so very much for the feedback. It keeps me motivated to continue.  I don't expect the next chapter to be so horribly delayed. Cheers.