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More Toil and Trouble by slaymesoftly
Chapter: Twelve
11/05/2014 09:29 pm
Nice to see an edgy story where Willow isn't either a cheerful elf or Darth Willow, but clueless and dangerous. And Evelyn doesn't come across as a Mary Sue Instant Solution to that set of problems.
Building slowly but nicely, too.
Building slowly but nicely, too.
Thank you. I'm glad it's working for you. And I doubt Evelyn is going to be able to "fix" Willow as well as she might like, but perhaps she'll give her more to think about....
11/04/2014 01:15 pm
Love the fighty bit and the dynamic they've developed, but of course Willow is still being... Willow.
She is. Not sure she ever gets completely over that....
11/04/2014 09:00 am
Nice battle, quick and clean. I see Willow still wants to be the wicked witch of the world, what's it going to take to show her the error of her ways? Great fun.
Thanks. Well, if Willow did a complete turn-around, it might be hard to explain season 6, yes?
SeaPea
11/04/2014 03:28 am
Went to this site before LJ today. Loved the little speech Buffy gave Spike regarding her Slayer duty in the beginning of the chapter. Well said.
Thank you. :)
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