Learning To Fly by spike_spetslayer
Chapter: Chapter 1--A Ribbon Of Black

12/11/2013 08:19 pm
I love the low key quality of your start - 

:-)
07/29/2010 05:21 am
 

06/20/2009 01:30 am
I love how you phrased that, "She watched the souless one...". Everyone is compared and contrasted with just five words and found lacking.

I'm hooked!

lauren
06/03/2008 08:07 pm
great start  for a story

08/10/2007 02:15 am
great start.

Verda
06/23/2006 05:26 am
That was an intriguing way to begin a story, and has all the promise of another amazing tale.
Thanks, Verda!

01/05/2006 03:11 pm
Now that's more like it! See, I like to think that Buffy wasn't completely content in heaven, that a part of her wanted to be alive, fighting the good fight. This is very well written! I'm running off to read the next chapter now! :D

12/14/2005 12:44 am
Love the plot twist and mythology. I'm so glad you are updating frequently. Thanks!

12/09/2005 12:50 pm
I love this chap. I loved Xander in the series during Season 1, then over the rest of the series came to hate him, but I hated hating him. Thanks for writing a Xander that realizes "what a dipshit" he's been, so that I can like him again!

12/08/2005 06:30 pm
Great story, well written :)

12/05/2005 08:55 pm
I'm loving this story! Glad to see Anya included, angsting about "evil" Xander, can't wait for more.

leather_n_lace060292@yahoo.co
12/03/2005 04:16 am
Good take on this...sending us off in a whole new direction. I'm going to keep on reading thanks...

Lou
11/24/2005 08:18 pm
Terrific take on the resurrection - I love how Buffy knows how Spike has kept his promise.

11/24/2005 10:58 am
Incredible. I can't believe I didn't find this sooner! I've never read a fic which expressed Buffy in such depth when she was in heaven or that higher plain. Beautifully written. On to the next chapter! ::grins::

11/24/2005 12:05 am
I'm loving this! I was going to try to wait until you finished it to read it, but you sucked me in. :) I can't wait to see what your resurrected Buffy is like.

11/17/2005 08:53 pm
OH, and here it is :) I've been waiting for this one, sweetie. That chapter was beautiful. Ironic that peace still eludes her.

sue
11/17/2005 04:43 pm
I'm hooked. Looking forward to your revised S6 with anticipation of another cracking good read. Thanks.

~*~Tasha~*~
11/17/2005 12:50 pm
This is off to a great start. I look forward to future chapters to see where you go with this. {smiles} I like your view of how she felt and what she saw.

11/17/2005 11:58 am
Very Lyrical. nicely done!

11/17/2005 09:31 am
Off to an interesting start, Pet. Love the idea that Buffy was a touch bored with Heaven. lol I can certainly see that.

Richard
11/17/2005 08:26 am
Good start. I take it she remembers everything. It would be unconstructive if she didn't. Also interesting is that while hatred is impossible in heaven, it's very much possible on Earth ....

Kat
11/17/2005 07:56 am
Oh yum. What a great start. hmmmm Now to what she remembers and what she choses to do about it. I can't wait to see more.

11/17/2005 07:24 am
Great start! Will she remember this when she digs herself out of the grave? Will she remember how wonderful Spike compared to her "friends"? More story please.

11/17/2005 07:18 am
Hey you! Well you've definitely got me intrigued, as this is a very interesting start to this fic. Kind of dark and foreboding, and yet melancholy and nostalgic at the same time. Great job. Looking forward to seeing where you go with this. ~Jess :)

11/17/2005 06:41 am
Nice! good job.