Vanishing Point by FetchingMadScientist
Chapter: Forty-Eight

~*~Tasha~*~
12/08/2005 06:43 pm
I'm glad that the last chapter you have up wasn't one that left me crying my eyes out all day. Still very moving though. I hope this is all settled soon. This is a killer of a story.
To this reveiw and all above it: Wow! Tasha- thanks for reading, you know it will be a rollercoaster ride, but stay with me. And for goodness sake, girl, don't read it at a stretch. You won't have any tears left! Go wipe your eyes, and let me remind you that Graveyard Holland is also Spike. Try to remember that my other story looked like it would end badly, but it ended Spuffy. This one will too...promise.

SpaceLord
12/08/2005 10:41 am
Lovely chapter. Alot of things happening at the same time, short hints here and there while the main story unfolds. Really interesting and I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Small hints, yes. But they are very important.

Nikkole
12/08/2005 09:30 am
Another wonderful chapter! Keep them coming! I just wanted to say, I like the subtle changes that you make in the future events every time something in the present changes a bit. I love the way this story is coming together!!
Thanks Nikkole- watch for the changes they come fast. If you blink you might miss them.