Learning To Fly by spike_spetslayer
Chapter: Chapter 22--Empty Air

08/09/2015 06:51 pm
Excellent chapter particularly like the use of Egyptian myths - 

12/12/2013 07:39 am
Nice way to return back to Dawn and the use of Egyptian mythology.  

Verda
06/23/2006 11:12 am
Must type fast. Need to find out more,BFN

Lou
12/13/2005 05:17 pm
Very clever lore invention - smartypants you!

12/13/2005 01:08 pm
Wow! That was sooooo well written. I like D’Hoffryn and am intrigued by the plot line with the feathers and the weighing of hearts. LOL. Can't wait to see what you have in store for us next.

12/13/2005 10:33 am
It's always fun when D'Hoffryn puts in an appearance. And he has provided some good information. I hope your knee feels better!

Nikkole
12/13/2005 10:21 am
Very nice! Very nice! I also like the part about the repressed souls! It fits Spike to a T! Can't wait for more! AND, speaking from someone who has damaged her knee beyond repair, I hope you feel better VERY soon!

~*~Tasha~*~
12/13/2005 10:20 am
Awesome twist and addition with Hoffie. Love it! Nice mythology there too. Excellent work all around. Sorry to hear about your knee. I've had a couple knee surgeries. So, I know that kind of pain is not a fun one. I hope yours isn't because of a surgery or a need of one. Look forward to more.

Tam
12/13/2005 08:28 am
very cool twist...the fic i mean...not the KNEE lol

kat
12/13/2005 08:12 am
That was a most intresting chapter. lots of 'new' information

12/13/2005 07:45 am
I LOVE this chapter. Now you're delving into things that I know a little bit about. Hope your knee feels better! -Lisa

sue
12/13/2005 07:00 am
Liked the whole soul thing and hope your knee is better soon, if not now. Thanks and looking forward to more.

12/13/2005 06:48 am
WOW!! Great Egyptian mythology thrown in here! Good thing for the Slayer to have a good barometer. It's also a good thing for the crap about souls to get straightened out. Love this story and look forward to more.

12/13/2005 05:55 am
damn nice chappie :P I love the fact that the plot doth thicken