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Hearts Breaking Even by slaymesoftly
Chapter: Five and Six
08/17/2012 04:12 pm
This is a FASCINATING re-take on the way they met, and I adore it. And it's clear he still feels quite a bit for her, and isn't in denial about it even if he isn't sure what to do about it. This is just so cool.
Thank you. Those bits were so fun to write. :)
alým
03/31/2008 01:23 am
I'm so attached to my chair. I doubt that I'll be able to stop when I need to.Loved this story so much:)
LOL Please don't get stuck in your chair!
Ann Skelton
02/26/2008 07:34 pm
I'm hooked. Gosh it makes me miss the show and chemistry between these two. I loved their chemistry way more than when it was between her and Angel. Love it, continue writing please!
Thanks. I hope you enjoy the rest of it. :)
02/23/2007 09:10 am
Sometimes I forget that she was so young and Spike's had over a hundred years of, Want-Take-Have. Can't say it enough, this is wonderful, thanks for sharing this amazing story.
Thanks for reading and commenting. *hugs*
02/09/2006 01:03 pm
Chapter One through Six - I really enjoyed this story Patti. Going back in time, meeting Spike as a boy, teaching him to fight and defend himself them meeting him as Spike was perfect. What a brilliant concept!
:-)
~*~Tasha~*~
12/26/2005 12:44 pm
Wow. I'm choked up over the end of this last post. {sighs with a heavy heart} Excellent writing. You always handle the emotions and character interactions so well and so descriptively. Heading to the next post. I think it is the last you have up so far. {sniffles}
Thanks - wouldn't be Spike and Buffy if all went well, would it?
vladt
12/24/2005 03:45 pm
love the storyline. keep it going. (was going to phrase that differently but the pun was too obviouse) thanks for the great read.
Thanks for reading and commenting. More soon.
Carol
12/24/2005 02:16 pm
What a great new story! Such a good idea. I loved it when Buffy used the "cheating" line and Spike remembered her. I'm looking forward to more of this one.
Thanks - more going up soon.
12/24/2005 09:45 am
Have finally caught up with this one....OMG it's fantastic! Love it to pieces! Looking forward to the next update!
Hee, Thanks, AD. Glad you like it.
12/24/2005 04:22 am
Hot, heartbreaking, and so terribly addictive... I'm so thoroughly loving this.
Thank you!
desertrose
12/24/2005 03:48 am
Wow I really like this story. Good twist on the meeting him when he was human thing. definately brings out the horror of him being turned when she knew him as an innocent child.
Thanks. I'm glad you picked up on that.
12/24/2005 01:40 am
this is just so wonderful patti. Truly this is one of the most original storylines I've seen, thanks for the speedy update!
Thank you for reading and reviewing. Updates to follow later.
12/24/2005 01:10 am
OMG! I love you! I'd offer to have your children if I wasn't QUITE sure I never want to be pregnant again! More please!
ROFL - I already have four. Quite enough, thank you! More soon.
idk5743228
12/24/2005 12:51 am
This just keeps getting better. I'm loving the conflict. I know the holidays are coming but I hope you will be able to post more. Thanks for a great story
Not to worry - I'll be posting as much as is written so far.Won't be able to go beyond that for awhile, though.
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