I dug that you kinda got into Xanders culpability in the dancing deaths. It's one of many threads left dangling throughout the series run.

Into every generation one man is born to be Santa Claus. When one dies - ”

”Another one is Chosen!
  That line there made me laugh out loud.

  I think I may have read this a couple years back, though I know that you have written more chapters since then.
  I am looking forward to seeing where this is headed.

  

Loads of potential plot strands here. Can't wait to see where you are going to go.

Wow - I didn't expect Buffy to actually tell Xander what happened as a result of his stupidity.  I hope that will turn out badly.  :)

that theory of santa is quite interesting...i like it better than the one in the show...can't wait to see what happens next :)