Hearts Breaking Even by slaymesoftly
Chapter: Nine and Ten

08/17/2012 04:37 pm
Three cheers for Spike being a hero and hurt-comforty goodness!

Also, I'm working my way through your repertoire of stories and I've seen elsewhere the device where Drusillais able to bring Angelus out to play.  It's a neat, plausible concept, and I like it.
I'm glad you like it. I have my own little fanon tropes that I seem to have decided are canon for my fics. :)

alým
03/31/2008 05:41 pm
I loved it. Hope Spike'll get better and kick Angelus' ass!
Well, somebody will, eventually...

02/23/2007 10:07 am
Damn! That would have shown her not to be putting your hands down a man's pants without getting a surprise! Like that she's checking him out. See what a real man looks like. Just love this AO, thanks.
thanks!

12/03/2006 12:19 am
Great chapter. Poor Spike.
Ah, he'll be all right - eventually...

02/09/2006 01:08 pm
I really enjoy Buffy's disbelief that she wasn't told about Angel's past. Poor Giles!

Dru thralling Xander was an excallant touch - Xander always is so cocky - he needs to be taken down a few hundred pegs!

Excellant Chapters!
:-)

akarinacj
12/27/2005 02:11 am
I just love the way you write, and like time-traveling stories a lot. I hope you explain how Angelus lost his soul, eventhough I can imagine the reason. he, he. I like this version of Buffy. Young and somehow still innocent. It will be very interesting to see how her relationship with Spike develops... Hope you updat soon.
Thanks! I'm glad you like it. It's always interesting to ponder how Buffy might have reacted to Spike had she not already had her heart broken by Angel, isn't it?

12/26/2005 10:45 pm
Tender, touching, innocent... these two chapters left my heart in my mouth and me feeling a bit breathless!
left my heart in my mouth and me feeling a bit breathless! hee! My work here is done....

idk5743228
12/26/2005 10:01 pm
Ooh, 2 more chapters. I expecially love the line about "..dragging the bitch back..." I do so love a motivated slayer. Thank you for the fast update. But as other people have said, I need more.
More soon - although, perhaps only one chapter at a time from now on.

SpaceLord
12/26/2005 06:19 pm
This is a very good story so far, I like the way you made them know each other and there for have a connection before they meet as vampire and slayer. Although the whole meeting between 9 year old william and buffy felt sort of like Anakin and Padme in Star Wars Ep I :)
Thanks for the kind words, and whoops!on Anakin and Padme - never even thought about that. I just didn't want them to have any kind of romantic relationship because that would be to similar to another fic that I love; so I made them close in age, but not close enough for hanky-panky.

vladt
12/26/2005 03:43 pm
love the story. lovely end to an otherwise mixed day. thank you
Thank you - glad I could help brighten your day, but sorry it was a mixed one. Here's hoping New Years will be better!

~*~Tasha~*~
12/26/2005 01:32 pm
Yippee! I refreshed the recently added page, and I was rewarded with another chapter of this one!!! Loved the two chapter post. Still hungry for more. I look forward to seeing how Angel lost his soul and what is going to happen next for Buffy and Spike.
Thanks for the steady reviews, Tasha - might have to start dragging the chapters out so as not to run out before it's finished.