Hearts Breaking Even by slaymesoftly
Chapter: Twelve

Arielle
02/09/2009 03:21 pm
Very good story so far. I love all stories that have a bit of time travel and romance.
But when you do words in all caps to emphasize something I suddenly hear the person shouting it in my head.
Kinda like in Austin Powers " I seem to be having trouble conTROLING THE VOLUME OF MY VOICE!!"

It's like suddenly they burst out angrily in my head lol and then I have to reread it to make it sound normal lol
Hee! Sorry about that. Sometimes I use italics, but if it's likely to be a loud or forceful use of the word, I may use all caps.   I hope you enjoy the rest of the fic.

alým
03/31/2008 06:35 pm
Oh,just shut up,Jenny! Me wants Angel dead.
So far so good:)
Angel already is dead...:) But I get your point.

02/23/2007 10:50 am
Xander's perfect, as clue less as ever and Willow's so cute with her little wave and her blush. Of course Giles would have kept his concert shirts, don't we all! Feeling really sorry for Buffy, she's the one who is going to lose the most in the end. Things will never be the same with Angel and Spike's leaving with Dru. Excellent work, thanks.
Thanks.

12/03/2006 12:39 am
No restoring of soul, Angelus should dust (just my opinion). Great chapter.
Yeah, that's pretty much been the vote. LOL We'll see.

12/29/2005 11:50 am
enjoyed the update right up to "What if I could restore the soul?" why not just dusted him right after he kills xander? my prejuice aside, i know you will present the story in your usual excellent, cohesive and entertaining manner.
Thanks, vladt. Angel dust seems to be a popular option, lol. But the fic is for Always_jbj, so it's her call whether we dust him or just torment the hell out of him.

idk5743228
12/29/2005 02:34 am
I hope I see where this is going. As always, a great chapter. I am truly enjoying this one. I look forward to more soon.
More coming up. Will be curious to see if my mind went the same way yours did...

~*~Tasha~*~
12/29/2005 02:12 am
Yeppers, Xander is an ignorant and prejudiced as ever. I like that Spike could tell immediately that Jenny was a gypsy. {Smiles} Excellent chapter. Look forward to the next update.
Thanks, Tasha- more soon

12/28/2005 09:37 pm
that stupid jenny calendar. pffft silly gypsies... ;)
probably not one of her better ideas...

12/28/2005 12:48 pm
YUCK! Xander is back spouting his ignorance as loudly as possible. Buffy should really let Spike eat him; it would help Spike heal faster than the nasty pig's blood. This is such a great story.
thanks - could still happen!

Ms Clawdia
12/28/2005 11:37 am
Just discovered this one today and can't wait for the next installment! Really different and interesting BtVS rewrite.
Thanks for commenting. I hope you continue to like it.

Carmie
12/28/2005 11:00 am
Please more! I love this story.
More soon. I'mglad you're liking it.

12/28/2005 09:47 am
Another fab chapter! Looking forward to the next!
Thanks, AD