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It's Not Enough by Morrigan 02/24/2006 01:09 am Poor Dawnie. :( Nice chapter, loved annoying Andrew. I love writing Andrew, because he is such a helpless dork!  I think he makes chapters fun.  There's more Dawn to come, and it's not all bad.  :)  Thanks again, for the review! 02/18/2006 04:29 am http://community.livejournal.com/riters_r_us/15386.html?nc=18 Ok already, note taken, And problem solved...  What can I say... I'm new?  *L* 02/17/2006 04:37 pm I'm really enjoyng this story so far but I found some of the dialogue a bit difficult to follow later on in this chapter. Maybe if you were to start a new paragraph with every change in speaker it would be clearer who is speaking. INteresting story onward I go to find ou what's afoot Thanks for the review! I know, there are a lot of little things that need changing, in some of the earlier chapters of this fic.  I keep saying I'm going to get to fixin' em... then I keep procrastinating.  *Bad Morrigan* But, I assure you that it gets a little easier as the story progresses.  This has been a stage for me. saffirered 01/05/2006 12:46 am Your chapters have a nice flow. Keep writting I can't wait to see more. I feel so sorry for Dawn. Thanks again, for reviewing! Glad you still like it. ~*~Tasha~*~ 01/04/2006 10:25 am Poor Dawn, neglected. Though Dawn did thoroughly tick me off in Season 7. Yeah.  The whole "Sister has got to go" thing ruffled my feathers too.  But, I'm glad I got her feelings across, with this chapter.  Thanks for reviewing! 01/04/2006 02:36 am Hey! I just wanted to know if you got my email? Let me know! I can resend it if you didn't. Nope. Just got the E, notifying me of a review. Send it back my way. I'll be online for a while. :) | |||
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