Hearts Breaking Even by slaymesoftly
Chapter: Seventeen

08/17/2012 05:23 pm
o noe teh angst... and Buffy's naivete is just... oh brother.
Much angst...

alým
03/31/2008 11:41 pm
Awww,that was...Awww...But you are gonna make everything better ,now,won't you? Can't wait for more.
Eventually...have faith.

02/23/2007 12:00 pm
Damn! I knew this was going to be hard for me. *sniff* They belong together. Hope they can be in the end. Thanks AO.
Hard for everybody - but it had to be done.

12/03/2006 01:58 am
Evil xander, trying to rape Buffy. I agree with Spike, dust both Angelus and Xander. Great chapter.
Like I said, I'm not very nice to him here. He is not a good guy.

Esther
01/07/2006 04:50 pm
Oh, sweetie, you've got me to fall in love with another of your stories!!! Have read it all, caught up with new chapters, and am totally in tears with that cliffy!! Gorgeous story so far, and I can't wait for more!!!
Well, it could have just ended like that you know...but it didn't. Just waiting for chapters to come back from the beta.

01/07/2006 12:41 pm
Loving it, Loveing it, Loveing it!
Thank you.

~*~Tasha~*~
01/06/2006 10:22 am
I'm with Spike on the fact that the demon only allowed thw tight rein to be let go. Xander wanted Buffy long before being a vampire. Why can't Buffy see that even after all Spike went through, he was still so much William. If he didn't have William he wouldn't have given a rat's ass about her. Instead Willow and Buffy do the whole soul is good scenario while Angel and Xander get a get out of jail free card for getting one. {sighs} So sad. I hope you are able to update soon.
I hope so too. Just waiting for Amy to get the next chapters back to me.

gaillee
01/05/2006 12:16 pm
How poignant..There are tears in my eyes. Hope things get better soon...
Thank you.

SpaceLord
01/05/2006 05:32 am
Sad chapter, I love it tho....I'm a sucker for this sad stuff :)
Wouldn't be Spike and Buffy if it all went smoothly, would it?

Lou
01/05/2006 04:18 am
Yummy angst.
LOL, my sentiments exactly!

Stacy
01/05/2006 04:09 am
Wow! I'm in love with this story. I loved little William and I love vampy Spike. Can't wait to read more. Thanks for writing.
thanks for reading and reviewing!

01/04/2006 11:26 pm
Well, I hope we are still gonna have a happy ending going. LOL. Great chappy though.
Corrina requested a happy Spuffy ending, so I couldn't end it here. Sigh.

Dirktavian
01/04/2006 10:51 pm
Sniff...how very sad. I'm sure Buffy's naivete will quickly be gone once she realizes how cold Angel and Xander can be, even with their souls, since they know the truth about her and Spike. Great update-- You did a wonderful job!
Thanks - I don't think she's all the fooled.....

Irina
01/04/2006 10:40 pm
I just caught up with the chapters I hadn't read before and i'm really enjoying the story. Can't wait to read more!
Thanks - more will have to wait until I get it back from the beta, I'm afraid.

dihcar
01/04/2006 10:12 pm
Dumbass willow and buffy really DON'T get it. Their thinken their friend is gonna come back, but the problem is that the demon shows you how vile the human is inside. Xander didn't want to kill a slayer, he wanted to fuck and rape. That fucker should be dusted, the only reason angel isn't is becuse he's supposdly a champion for the powers to be.
um - tell us how you really feel! LOL Hang with the story for awhile and see what happens.