This is some stupid shit. Take this down. Its horrible.

this is another wonderful story. your writing is so great. it evokes such deep emotions and is just so beyond well written. i really like the idea for this story. i gotta tell you that it was a bit hard to read faith and all her awful sadistic actions. like - phew! she was so damn evil that i couldn't quite get a grip on that. you write evil really well. hopefully not from personal experience! and god - willow was damn scary too! thank god xander was decent in this one. ooooo and giles - leaving spike at faith's mercy like that - greater good be damned! i really like the way you write buffy in this story - no ambivalence on her part at all - damn right! i'm glad that she gave it good to giles, even though he had helped. and giles took it in as he should with "as you wish buffy". Thank you so much for writing this deeply absorbing, riveting story and for letting buffy and spike be together.

Faith without restraint is a scary idea! Love the story, love the concept. Not to quibble but didn't Spike fulfill his part of the bargain by helping stop the torture of Giles and clearing out the riff raff while Buffy took on Angelus? I thought that was all he was to do then get Dru out of the way and out of town? Whatever, what IS important is that this is one fine story. I look forward to daily updates and THANK YOU for that blessing, you make me ashamed of my tardy WIP updates of late! Kathleen

I'm confused. Spike didn't break his agreement with Buffy in Becoming. He promised to get Dru out of the way and he did. Is that part of the AU?

Eww. Spaith. Pardon the pun, but I have faith that you wil make it all better soon.

Great start. The situation you have set up in Sunnydale offers great dramtic possabilities. And was the effect of Spike words on Buffy just what he was after?

Great start. The situation you have set up in Sunnydale offers great dramtic possabilities. And was the effect of Spike words on Buffy just what he was after?

I have to agree with the others--you're a fantastic writer--I'm sure I made the comment on Saving Grace about the way you bring out the characters and our emotions. I know things aren't as they seem. But I need an update soon!

Great start. The situation you have set up in Sunnydale offers great dramtic possabilities. And was the effect of Spike words on Buffy just what he was after?

A promising start.

Excellent opening. Faith, is it? And of course the Mayor...