Hearts Breaking Even by slaymesoftly
Chapter: Eighteen and Nineteen

alým
04/01/2008 12:15 am
Looved the letter.Hope Joyce'll be fine with the whole 'Slayage' stuff.
Might take her a while, but she'll be okay.

02/23/2007 12:26 pm
Poor Joyce that's one hell of a discovery, vampires and demons are real. And William loves her. xander and Angel are vamps and Giles is her watcher. Oh and Willow's a witch. A lot to absorbe. Great chapter, thanks. One more and I'm done for the morning.
One more, it is. :)

12/03/2006 02:10 am
Gret chapter. The letter from William almost made me cry, it was so beautiful.
:) *hands you a tissue*

02/09/2006 01:14 pm
Review: Chapter Fourteen - Nineteen - - Wonderful Wonderful Chapters - I absolutly adore the dru, angel, and xander scenes - Xander makes such a wonderful fantastic vampire *grin*
:-)

Lou
01/11/2006 09:00 pm
I think Angel and Xander deserve each other - they'll make a lovely couple. William's letter was perfect. Great story!
They deserve each other, don't they? Thanks for reading and reviewing.

akarinacj
01/11/2006 04:51 pm
I just read the others reviews for this chapter and I couldn´t agree more. Great Chapter, great letter, and great idea with Angel and Xander forced to live together, oh, and great with Buffy telling her mother about her life. Please update soon. I miss Spike, when is he coming back?
Oh, he'll be back. You know Spike. He never stays away when he says he's going to. Thanks for reading and commenting.

~*~Tasha~*~
01/11/2006 02:38 pm
That letter was so beautiful and tragic at the same time. My heart breaks for Buffy and Spike. I look forward to more.
Thanks - glad you liked it. More soon.

Irina
01/11/2006 02:18 pm
I really liked Spike's letter. He hasn't been gone long and I already miss his presence in the story. Angel and Xander stuck together is a great twist. Great chapter!
Thanks!

Jess
01/11/2006 01:32 pm
Good story! So sad that Spike had to leave. That's not the end, is it?
Nope, not the end. Thanks for reading.

Esther
01/11/2006 12:49 pm
Great update!!! Love that Buffy isn't backing off of her anger towards Angel and Xander (and it's utter genius to have them live together, btw), so I cheered when she almost staked them and had them disinvited. Tears again with William's letter....ah, I hope he comes back soon. And wow, what a way to find out your daughter's a slayer. Great stuff!!! Can't wait for another!!!
thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it.

idk5743228
01/11/2006 09:01 am
I don't know whether to laugh at the idea of Angel and Xander having to live together, can we say ODD couple; or cry at Buffy reading Spike's letter. Excellent chapter. Please don't leave Buffy sad.
You could do both - one is funny, one is sad. I'll try to make Buffy happier.

01/11/2006 08:07 am
Very nice, as always!!! Angel and Xander have their souls which is good, but Buffy's so unhappy now.
thanks - she is, but she's young.