Nice twist to the original and Spike kissage is always oh so nice. Enjoying this very much, thanks for the read.

I like the way you brought them together again. Just a brief interlude. I am also enjoying Spike's increasingly farfetched reasons for not killing her or showing his true face (screaming and such).

Great job.

that was soooo sweet...I like this developing relationship!

Sweet and fun.

Very interesting start. Can't wait to see where you go with it. :)

I like how this is going. you know just little moments that bring them together but as such (at the moment) are not wrecking the original storyline at all

Vampires real? No, it can't be true. I must have missed a memo somewhere. I actually thought for the scene you painted that this was a pretty sweet chapter. I liked how it nudged the story along. Please post more soon

Well interesting start, now I'm going to wait and see where you take this story.