Nice start! More story please.

great chapter

wonderful start. had to go reread "Hidden Agendas", which i loved the first time, before starting this work. thanks for the fine read.

So Dawn is upset that she has to spend time with her dad? That's too bad. I remember the references to him on the show weren't very flattering-- i think the classic being that he was "In Spain with his secretary; living the cliche". I've often suspected that Joss Wedon has a similar relationship with his father. There don't seem to be many good fathers in the Buffy-verse. Maybe Fred's dad? Anyway looking forward to reading your take on the whole thing. It could be a very interesting dynamic and I'm curious to see where you'll take it!

Poor Dawn. It might be fun for Spuffy to have the house to themselves for a while though. Are you setting us up for some juicy smut? Who is hiding in the shadows? More story please.

Oh, evil place to leave it. Is that her dad? Well, I don't blame Dawn, I'm not a huge fan of fathers having to deal with a total prick of one, but that's a different story. Spike was too cute in this chapter. Getting all jealous of guys that don't even exist. I really don't think he has to worry, he should just trust her. I just hope he doesn't start getting like Angel about her needing a human man that can take her into the sunlight, frankly it's bad for you. I actually would prefer the dark. As usual, I got all happy when I saw an update. Can't wait for more=)