Before the Madness Begun by Nemo
Chapter: Chapter Nine – Weird

07/28/2006 03:14 pm
Another great chapter. You really have all of their dialogue down,
Giles, Willow and Xander's was perfect. Naked Spike! the best! Glad you call him beautiful, because that's what he is, not handsome no, he is beautiful. Great read.
That you think I've got the dialogue right is very reassuring, thank you! Spike is just beautiful, I agree :D

03/23/2006 12:35 am
I really love this story...thank you soooo much for the wonderful mental images! ;)
Mental images? Oh, this is the one with Spike in the shower, huh? *dreams* hehe... yum!

Lou
02/08/2006 09:37 pm
Great dialogue and such an innocent young Buffy and supercool Spike. Good Angelus too - not clunky. I'm really enjoying it
Thank you Lou! That felt really reassuring, I'm glad you like it!

02/05/2006 07:41 pm
Great update! I am surprised that Angelus didn't already have someone following the Slayer and the scoobs but then again, if he did, then the shower wouldn't be enough to saves Spikes tail. I can't wait to see how the gang reacts to Jenny's news and what happens next! Please update soon!
Thank you lilmanday for the review! Yeah, that Angelus in't following them might seem unlikely, but you'll find out in the next chapter what he's been up to... thanks again ~Nina

v ladt
02/04/2006 08:59 am
great fic. realy enjoyable read. thanks
Thank you!

02/04/2006 05:50 am
Good ogle! Buffy should have told Spike Angelus was the "smallest" mistake of her life. WEG
More story please.
*LOL!* Of course! Why didn't I think of that! 'big' *snorts* as if! Thanks Marzbar for giving me a review!