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Belonging by DreamsofSpike
Chapter: Edge of Darkness
vladt
03/25/2006 03:57 am
finally had the opportunity to devote to your fic. good read. last couple of chapter, exceptionly good. thanks for the read.
thanx so much, so glad you like it now that you're having the chance to read it :)
02/09/2006 03:28 pm
By the way I love the last line in this fic. “Didn’t anyone ever teach you not to touch other people’s things without asking?†OMG that was so funny!
thanx...glad you liked it.... Spike probably didn't like it much though ;)
02/09/2006 06:06 am
Oh, it can't end there! I want to see Riley-torture. I can't wait for another update! Feed my addiction, please... :)
Don't worry Riley will pay soon! :)
02/09/2006 01:45 am
Wow... ummm... can I just say that you are EVIL for leaving it right there? I can? Okay great; YOU ARE EVIL!!!! GAH!!! Please please please update soon; I want to see Buffy kick Riley's ass!!
lol...one Riley a**-kicking coming up!! :)
02/08/2006 11:23 pm
Creative torture sequence....lots left to the mental images without writing it all out. Tricky to pull off....kudos.
Not sure who I hate more, Riley or Velvet LOL.
Felt bad that Buffy called Spike a thing, but glad she's there and cares.
I'd say she should feed Velvet to Spike but he deserves something not likely to poison him!
Excellent update to an excellent story.
Kathleen
Not sure who I hate more, Riley or Velvet LOL.
Felt bad that Buffy called Spike a thing, but glad she's there and cares.
I'd say she should feed Velvet to Spike but he deserves something not likely to poison him!
Excellent update to an excellent story.
Kathleen
Thanks...I didn't want to be too graphic with that scene for once...glad you noticed the "thing" line at the end...coming at a bad time for Spike, right after Riley's verbal abuse to reinforce it... glad you're enjoying the story :)
Nikkole
02/08/2006 07:46 pm
You just had to end it there didn't you? You are a cruel, cruel person! I LOVE IT!! LOL! VERY good chapter. Can't wait for the next one.
yep, i know, i'm as sadistic as Riley... lol... thanx ;)
MAGGIE
02/08/2006 06:16 pm
AMAZING WONDERFUL STORY STARTED READING COULD NT STOP WAS GREATLY DISSAPPOINTED WHEN THERE WAS NT ANYMORE TO READ I HOPE SOON VERY SOON YOU LL ADD SOME MORE NICE LONG CHAPTERS PLEASE IT WOULD MAKE THIS OLD LADY IN THE MOUNTAINS VERY HAPPY THANK YOU MAGGIE
so glad you're enjoying it...don't worry i'll update very soon :)
02/08/2006 04:49 pm
noooooooooo..... not the end of the chapter....
sorry...okay not really ;)
Dar
02/08/2006 04:29 pm
Just tell me he's not just a thing to Buffy. Though Velvet is a thing, Riley is a thing both evil soulless things. Great update.
i'm glad so many people caught on to the importance of that line... good Buffy quip, but bad for Spike... thanx for review :)
anon
02/08/2006 03:57 pm
its nice that Buffy called him her THING before he passed out
yep...poor baby, so *not* what he needed to hear :(
ComedyofErrors
02/08/2006 03:36 pm
Excellent last two chapters. Riley makes a good sadist with his holy water and whips. Must say I didn't anticipate the spell he'd placed on Buffy, but it makes sense. Great behavior from Velvet.
I like Buffy's awakening sense of self and her friends' support.
I like Buffy's awakening sense of self and her friends' support.
thanx, so glad you're enjoying it :)
ComedyofErrors
02/08/2006 03:36 pm
Excellent last two chapters. Riley makes a good sadist with his holy water and whips. Must say I didn't anticipate the spell he'd placed on Buffy, but it makes sense. Great behavior from Velvet.
I like Buffy's awakening sense of self and her friends' support.
I like Buffy's awakening sense of self and her friends' support.
thanx :)
Stacy
02/08/2006 02:12 pm
Oh my! That was a horrible place to stop. Now I have to nag... HURRY, Hurry. Post, Post! We really need an update ASAP! Thanks for writing(quickly).
okay okay!!!! LOL thanx for kind review, motivates fast writing :)
jacquie
02/08/2006 12:25 pm
My sanity may never forgive you...You CAN*T stop there!!!!! That's just cruel! MORE MORE MORE!
thanx so much :) promise update soon
02/08/2006 10:55 am
starts up a chant for Velvet dustage. never knew I could hate a vampire character so much - excellant update sweetie! I loved this story! *Huggles*
i'm so glad you hate her...means I'm doing my job :) thanx for review :)
Lou
02/08/2006 10:02 am
Yaaay! Buffy's back - and she's mad! Please update asap!!
yep...someone's going down :)
Spikes Slayer2
02/08/2006 09:29 am
SQUEE!!!! arghhh!!! she's there!!!! *does happy dance*
:) hehe thanx :)
02/08/2006 08:49 am
Oh, I hope this is it...the end of that nasty Velvet tramp! You have done a wonderful job of creating a character that I really love to hate!
thanx...that was my goal :)
02/08/2006 08:49 am
Yes! Here comes Buffy to the rescue! Finally! All that torture made me sick, I can't tell you how mad I am at Riley, and Velvet! F*cking bitch! Sorry, now I'm cursing again... but your story reallly has catched me. Thank you for being so fast with the updates! Great story jl!
yeah, they're gonna pay now though :) thanx for review :)
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