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Vanishing Point by FetchingMadScientist
Chapter: Sixty-Four
~*~Tasha~*~
03/26/2006 05:54 pm
Oooo ... Sorry about not putting more in my last review for the last chapter, but I had a burst of need to get to this next chapter. Excellent update. I don't know how you come up with all of it. It boggles my mind to try and get it all straight.
Just imagine the damage I could do if I really tried! ;-) I was a creative writing minor in college. Does it show?
Nikkole
02/09/2006 02:42 pm
WOW! That was an interesting twist! I can't wait to see how you end this. It looks as though Spike was taking samples from Joni? Maybe so that there is an antidote for the "lace" when it comes? If that is the case, very nice addition to the story also!
When the story ends, if you read it again from the beginning, I think you'll find the twists aren't such a surprise. ;-)
SpaceLord
02/09/2006 09:46 am
Lovely chapter, gotta love Spike telling stories to Jonina and then her finding the princess....just lovely.
Thanks. I know I'm *waaay* past the age of fairytales, but I always thought of the show "Buffy" as an adult fairytales.
Miss Rose
02/09/2006 05:41 am
I liked Spike and Buffy's Interregnum conversation, it was very insightful. The glimpse into the dangers of Spike and Joni's world was really interesting. It's great Homer helped Spike remember his purpose and he decided to take preventative measures to help Joni. And the end of the chapter was excitingly wonderful! :) Great job as always!
Thanks! I love writing all of the Spike/Jonina scenes for reasons I've shared before. If Buffy can use Slayer dreams as a "Heads-up" Homer can talk to Spike. Hint: Read "Keeping Time" again.
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