Vanishing Point by FetchingMadScientist
Chapter: Sixty-Six

~*~Tasha~*~
03/26/2006 06:06 pm
Oh man ... I'm crying here, FMS. {sniffles} First I was happy because of Dawn finding the cure ... then I was crying over how touching and emotional Spike's goodbye to them was.
Aww,*hands you a tissue* it gets better, I promise.

Robyn
02/24/2006 10:30 am
Once I started this story I couldn’t stop, it is so well written. The emotional impact is unbelievable, you have a real gift of bringing your readers, or at least this reader, into the story to the point that I had tears running down my face during several chapters in this story. I am looking forward to what you have coming up.
Thank you Robyn. I know, sometimes it can really pull you in. At times I can't even believe the story myself. Enjoy the tale. I think you'll be happy with the outcome.

Pia
02/22/2006 11:24 pm
Found you! OK, there's a lot of daughters around now a days, this Mabel I don't remember from the first 64 chappies, but maybe I've been unfocused in the daughter-department. Wouldn't surprise me.
Still a lot of worries about Holland, a smell of brimstone you say? That can't be good...
At least things seems to go well for Spike and his followers. Can't be much left now. What about human Angel, hmm?
Yes, there is one more. I've been focusing on the years when there's been "Drama" in the lives of our favorite couple. But there were those "In between" years. Thought I'd give you a glimpse. (At least I didn't drop her in like M.E. did with "Dawn.") And don't worry, all other elements will be touched on in the next few chapters. There are only three left anyway! Enjoy!

Miss Rose
02/22/2006 01:52 pm
I loved the threads that came together in this chapter. Mabel is so adorable. I know I said it before concerning Joni and Spike, but I just love the way you write the scenes between the children and the parents. *crossing my fingers* I'm sensing a happy family reunion in the offing. :D Wonderful chapter!
Yes,all the threads will come together. I have three more chapters. Happy ending...yeah, sure. Why not? :-)

SpaceLord
02/22/2006 10:34 am
Another beatiful and sad chapter....I do love the angst in this story.
Good. So do I. I know I'm Evil, but I love writing angst. :-)