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Before the Madness Begun by Nemo
Chapter: Chapter Thirteen – Body Count
07/29/2006 08:10 am
Couldn't review last chapter it fatal errored, I'll go back later. Spike's loved Dur for a hundred years, of course he's not just going to fall in love with Buffy just like that. The story's moving along quite well. As we can see by his inability to kill the girl, he is starting to have feelings for Buffy. Another great chapter. Hope this goes.
Thank you Verda for still trying to review when thr site is acting up. I appreciate it. :)
VWalk
07/25/2006 10:40 pm
I'm glad that Buffy is holding her own against her friends. I get so tired of her constant need to explain herself to them sometimes. Great story.
Oh yeah, me too. I'm glad you like it. :)
03/23/2006 01:14 am
Still here and loving it! More please
That makes me so glad! Thanks you for taking time to review!
03/01/2006 02:31 pm
I am taking your word on the Spuffy stuff, but in the mean time, I am glad that Buffy is realizing some truths about her so called "Friends". Great to see her open her eyes before it becomes too late. Love the story.
I'm glad your loving the story. :D And yes, I can wonder too sometimes what kind of friends the scoobies are (like in s7 when they kicked her out.. I mean wtf?) but most of the time they mean well and I love them. I hope I kept them real in this chapter, as you said Buffy needed to realize some truths. Thank you for another review! ~Nina
03/01/2006 02:41 am
Why did Merrick leave her in the institution?? Why did the COUNCIL leave her in the institution?? *looks all confused*
Good question! The way I see it (and I hate the council) they are to slow to get her out of there quickly. Probably sitting on their fat asses and working with their papers and don't really care if she's in ther a couple of weeks or more. But that's up to you how you want to explain it :) That was my exlanation :)
03/01/2006 01:24 am
You are really keeping them in character for season 2 and I am loving it! Seeing Spike trying to be evil but at the same time trying to please everyone, even Buffy, is great! I just hope that Buffy and the Scoobs don't find out that Spike is feeding, it will crush her! Please update soon!
I'm glad you think I'm keeping them in character, and that you like how Spike is acting. Always good to know. Thanks for reading and leaving a review! :)
vladt
03/01/2006 12:11 am
thanks for the update. you are making it more difficult for yourself, but i am sure you will bring this interesting tale to where you desire. thanks again
Thank *you* for reading! :) Yup, I'm probably making things difficult for myself, but that's just me, don't want the easy way out. I hope you'll keep reading and follow my twists and turns. Thanks for the review!
02/28/2006 11:12 pm
I know this is only season 2 but couldn't you go off canon enough to slap the shit out of Xander? More story please.
*lol* I'm seriously considering that... Xander can be an ass, I know, but he'll get better :-P
SpaceLord
02/28/2006 10:40 pm
Well I don't mind if it takes a while for the spuffy ness....it's the journey that is interesting really.
Well that's how I see it too, I'm glad you agree with me. :D
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